Genboxxy December 20, 2023 10:08 am

It's honestly not that bad, the art's great too, but I dunno, the plot seemed to drag on storywise.

I was really excited during the first season, then the latter part was just filled with drama and the motivations for the villain's actions sometimes come off as just BS cliche (which could definitely work btw, I just don't vibe with it in this work), also I noticed that the main couple, in almost every scene that they are in, all they do is have seggs, not that I'm complaining, it's steamy and well drawn, but it does make me feel disconnected towards the supposed development of their relationship.

Not satisfied with the ending too, feels like the uke failed and shot the seme for realz and thus they're meeting in heaven at the end or somethin (why was it drawn like that author, why?) I know they inserted that comment from Reign about needing the "ingredient" to ensure readers that the ML is still alive, but still, with how the panels progressed, it seemed otherwise.

This author's way of storytelling is quite reserved, too reserved, by that I mean, it keeps too much of the information away from the readers, possibly to incite suspense, but the way it's handled is just confusing and alienating as a reader towards the characters and plot.


Definitely strong points for art, plotwise, I'd say maybe tone it down? since the author comes off as trying to fit in too many prompts in one story, which coincidentally they did admit in the end notes.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 9:19 am

I don't vibe with the characters and their dynamic with each other, I find it hard to finish all, even started it multiple times to see if my view will change; I don't get it myself, it's highly rated, and there's plenty worse out there, but this is just like the centerfold of everything meh for me.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 9:18 am

Everything is just so healthy and smooth, but not idealistic, like the characters did have to develop in order to be a better version of themselves, they weren't perfect from the start, still it didn't focus on drama and angst, but rather on fluff and slice of life which is so, so goooood. It's also tagged as yaoi but there wasn't really a sex scene, only an implication (maybe with the 2nd couple in the future?), still that's probably for the best because it centers on babies and family life, so having it focus on wholesomeness to provocativeness would be a whiplash, this style suits it best. I hope the future release would get uploaded soon too.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 9:13 am

It's cute, and easy to read which is one of the things I like in graphic novels, however, it's too sudden? There was a plot up until chapter 3, then it just became episodic, don't know if the author is just eager to get them together or they were just given 3 chapters to do their thing originally, nonetheless it could have been better, there are literal oneshots that are able to pull off convincing plotlines in just a chapter. I don't get what made the seme attracted to the uke or the uke to the seme, their devotion to each other seems to spurt out of nowhere, the little tensions here and there that the author tries to incorporate seems halfbaked and eventually fizzles away into an underwhelming subplot. Maybe it's because of translations issues, I'll give it that, still nothing exquisite, I like the art tho.

    ineedjesus December 30, 2023 8:58 pm

    It’s because there’s soooo many chapters missing :( I remember reading a few years ago and there was character development and angst but idk where the chapters went

    Genboxxy January 4, 2024 4:15 pm
    It’s because there’s soooo many chapters missing :( I remember reading a few years ago and there was character development and angst but idk where the chapters went ineedjesus

    oh, that would make sense, but I wonder why it was removed? I checked some other sites where this work is uploaded and they all have the same number of chapters too. Is it really this work or perhaps you've read a similar plot? another one from this author maybe and you sorta joined them together since it's been quite a while as you've said?

    ineedjesus March 29, 2024 7:17 am
    oh, that would make sense, but I wonder why it was removed? I checked some other sites where this work is uploaded and they all have the same number of chapters too. Is it really this work or perhaps you've rea... Genboxxy

    I’m honestly not sure, but I remember reading this a year ago and there was more to the story, like angst and more. But maybe im delusional

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 9:11 am

I guess coz they actually have a healthy relationship and communicates well, the relationship is good but the chemistry for me just seems lacking? like if this was just shounen and they're just close friends, the dynamic wouldn't be that much different for me; but then again plotwise, it might not work coz the seme is too into the uke, like literally that's his entire personality in this story; if this was a real dude I'd be worried he'll actually kill himself if they break up coz he has nothing else going on for him nor does he even try to explore other stuffs, just the uke and uke alone, it's borderline creepy and feels suffocating; he seems like a good dude tho and not the toxic possessive type (dats y I say he'll kill himself if they breakup instead of going stalker/yandere mode). As for the uke, I don't know, I like that he's confident and he trusts the seme well, but he just comes off as too complacent? too oblivious for his own good at times and feels like he went out with the seme just for the fun of it or simply because he can. Nothing memorable about the plot and conflicts, it's a bit wishy washy but still good. I like the fashion in this work tho, I guess that's partly why the author did this setting, to practice drawing fashion stuffs.

Genboxxy August 3, 2025 3:27 am

Nothing much happens, everything's good, too good, maybe a drama or two would make it better, nothing grand, just a tiny one. Anyway, it's one of those mangas that I forget I already read then remember midway, starts off more to my taste then shifts to (meh for me) along the way.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 9:04 am

2.5/5 this da one with the omega who got force bonded to some prick who rapes him, then quickly got disbonded by the main seme through the power of "fated pair". It could've worked but the author really emphasized on the uke's assault(s) in this story, so much so that the thing with the main seme just doesn't work for me. It might've been better if it was tagged as NTR instead of putting on a facade that this is romance, coz it doesn't really seem to be one.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 8:53 am

The seme is a jerk (not the bully type, more on the pretend-puppy manipulative sort) and a rapist, throughout the story, his motivations and character were not good enough to pull off those actions; uke on one hand is quite naive, not childish, just naive

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 8:51 am

still, it's cute and the angst doesn't stick long because they actually do want to know more about each other (tho on the seme's case, he did background investigation on the uke) and communicates their worries well enough. Uke is pretty both character design-wise and plotwise but is not overtly made feminine both in features and his actions; seme is nice, he can be too clingy and untrusting but at least the author made his background make sense to justify these traits.

Genboxxy December 11, 2023 8:49 am

there's just too much fighting, like literal fighting, I get that they're delinquents (allegedly), but at some point I was just laughing how much these teens fight and get attacked. Anyway, still like it, but that aspect really takes a toll, specially now that looking back to it, it feels it was put up as a shield for actual plot development, you take away the fights and not much happens here because again, it's used as the plot itself and plot device simultaneously. Maybe the author is just into drawing beaten up characters that's why they opted for this route.

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