
I'm so happy there's more but even ignoring the chapter 8 skip, I find there are really a lot of holes and points where the story kinda jumps around. I'm attributing it to the chapter 8 chunk missing, and translation. I hope there is some kind of official translation down the line that evens the story out. I do love everything else about this though.

”Why won't these two, most frustrating of hotties just fucking TALK TO EACHOTHER?!? I swear if someone doesn't just explain to the other ”W.H.Y” They are going to do something, want to do something, or don't want the other to do something, TELL THEM!”
TO
*The most deafening of silence I've ever heard coming from my own mind.*
WOW
That was insanely we done! I'm so glad this is going down the week written route of Two Souls and not the excuse for the most fucked up gang bang I've ever witnessed, that is Profundus. I don't trust that we'll get back on plot in Profundus, having become a round trip on the express train between Abuse city and Unnecessary-Rape town.
you dick! He's. Exploring. Your. BODY! So sorry back and STFU!
Hehehehehe
*sit back