This is a great story and novel premise. It reminds me a little of Enders Game with the Formica ant thing. I like the art too, and I think it’s hilarious about how Van is such a freak. I hope he truly comes out with some redeeming quality, since that poor skinny dude has suffered enough. I can’t wait to read more of this!
First, the art is good, but the pointy chins and the weird glasses are getting me. And a lot of the characters look alike so I get confused sometimes. I liked where this started at first, but the plot is getting confusing and somewhat repetitive. I don’t understand how they broke up but are not broken up? I am not sure where this is going to lead to. The beat downs are crazy extreme though. I like how beautiful the mom is and how she still struggles to try to get some freedom for her son. It’s okay so far, but after a few more chapters, if there is no significant progress, I can’t take the ML apathy.
The world and the characters are absolutely amazing. The main characters are really beautiful beings. The idea of the avian and serpent races i so vivid and imaginative. This needs a bit better smut scenes, but other than that, it is amazing. That is a piddly little critique, but it’s the only one I have. Absolutely amazing story!










…he calls him dad. It’s likely because he doesn’t know what it’s like to have a dad, and he is the only male who provided any kind of nurturing and love. It’s an all encompassing love~like father, brother, lover, friend. I don’t think it’s right, but it’s kind of sad and beautiful at the same time.