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Darling is one of the more cringe ones... babe or honey are easier. Darling had an air of something about it. Don't get me wrong I do call my husband that sometimes but it always comes across ott and a bit sarcastic. Honey is better.

Dropping the link to novel for anyone who wants it

https://readhive.org/series/61544/

Didn't they just have a huge hiatus (╯°Д °)
Shits kinda funny though

Hmmmm

We're confusing mating and hunting! They're not the same thing... if anything in mating the males have to impress the females, they dont hunt them! I think that's only being discussed because of their differing predator/prey designation. He's basically confused wanting the eff the rabbit instead of eating it. I get it... kinda.. .

But leaving that, it is confusing using hunting and mating as the same thing... dominance in the pack too. We're blurring a lot of lines and using examples that aren't synonymous. In nature would a wolf /snake eat a dog/rabbit? Just the rabbit I guess? I mean a dog is a predator to a rabbit ffs! I just.... it's confusing and they just seem to only being explaining things as it becomes relevant. I don't know how important the nature of the animal is vs it's designation as prey or predator.

I get his point vaguely, he doesn't want to hurt him and lose control. And I guess it's tricky because of the crossovers in this story but what I'm taking from this is that having sex and being turned on will make him want to murder? I really don't think that's how it works for anyone so it's a huge stretch. Or is it that he'll just be too rough? I don't understand the issue! Be clear about what could happen. Is he going to murder him with sex or during/after it?

Last thing, I don't think there is any animal that effs for dominance... they fight. Unless you're talking about dogs humping? There's no penetrative there though right? I dunno just the whole premise is getting convoluted for me.

I'd prefer the amnesia to stick. If he has it, I hope he never remembers because he'll be come that again. If he genuinely doesn't remember, it would be best for him to be a different person. That's not exactly healthy but none of this is!

I'm intrigued. I love how firm and brutal she's being. Keep it up Ray!

Also loving the William morris wallpaper and curtains. We had that in my parents house when I was little (=・ω・=)

Overall, I think we could have cut about 30 chps in the middle and still have the same story told. The drag was intense! Finally interesting again. This is why I don't stop just because I'm bored. Only when seriously triggered to anger do I stop (≧∀≦)

Guys, think about your kid first! Put him first. Stop being selfish and work out your feelings for each other later. If you both put the kid first, you'll know you're in it together and telling the truth, building trust etc.

Also, just answer the effing questions!! Acting like children.

So I thought this started strong. It felt cute and nice. Around ch 13 I was like 'oh no' but honestly other than just now ch24, ml is being OK as far as they go in this genre. There was consent and he made the relationship type pretty clear. I can work with this. He's clearly more invested than he realised. Don't like the initiating sex with someone who is asleep and drunk - it's rape tbh.

I thought this was just going to be a cute 'cold-hearted no nonsense ceo thaws to a genuine cutie patootie and his ray of sunshine personality' that'd be cute and it's kind of happening but not as gently as I'd hoped.

I am happy ml isn't coming into mcs life and ruining things, taking the debt and making him pay him back, he's not put off by how he lives. He doesn't look down on him for anything. He's kind of charmed by him without realising but clearly very jealous... not a healthy look.

Contriversial opinion - He's not obligated to help mc with his debt, especially since it's his dads debt and I'm sure will just rack up again anyway. I'm sure he'll end up getting involved with it all it's just a tricky thing when debt and romantic relationships collide. Unless he helps him get the dad to be fully liable and free mc of any and all liability for the debt. That would be good.

Oh also don't like the lying about his job... unnecessary as a lie. Overall, love the mc and u only want happiness for him. So shape up ML! Need to earn that ray of sunshine!

I wanna know how there's two golden haired women... I'm assuming asha is a fake? I'm kind of intrigued with the backstory and the plot enough that the sex is just annoying and in the way. I don't want to see her being taken advantage of and lied to during and about sex.

Though if she thinks sex is showing love it could turn out she'd be OK with licht also loving her that way? That's how I'd interpret what carlix is telling her ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Maybe reading too much harems and hunks and I want her to sleep around through choice.

On a side note, the drawing is getting better, calrix looks a little less stupid but the anatomy is terrible at times. He hips and body is just wrong during sex! Carlix's butt in that one panel was just hilarious too (≧∀≦)

Amnesia plots are so overdone. How about you don't make your characters so irredeemable you have to make them forget what they did to be a better person. Just an idea.

Urgh, I don't hate them as much as some but it just feels lazy or like they wrote themselves into a corner. I hope there's a good reason for it.