Bitch ML: "I want the person I love to notice me so I'll rape him over and over again until he loves me back."... wtf was this shitty ahh story
So far, it's kind of boring. I'm so tired of immediate sex scenes
Does this have a novel? Preferably translated. If not, I might need to marinate this since I'm so confused
Ppl in the comments complaining are so pathetic. Nobody gaf if u didn't want a twink bottom just don't read it then?? This is the same energy as going to BLS with buff bottoms and complaining he isn't a top. Some ppl prefer twinks and others prefer hunks. It's okay to have a preference without shitting on others with the opposite pref. gtfo here if u don't like this. easy right? Anyways uke looks so cuteee!!!
This shows nothing else but the author's inability to be good at being an author. If you as a writer feel compelled to write a rape scene specifically when it add ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO THE PLOT justto make your story feel like it has some substance, its a depiction of you being extremely bad and almost inept to be writing a story and wasting people's time.
Get help, not just mentally but read more stuff first, then write small stories like a 10th grader with your beginners' talent, learn more, then try to call yourself and author. Overall you're not a talented writer but ig working hard and honing your skill before gloating like one can make you a good author in the future. Begin again from scratch that's all.
Seeing as you've blocked me, I'll just comment instead. It's a fact it's rape, it's not an opinion. You're objectively wrong and choosing to stay ignorant. Its not cute, it's honestly disturbing that you want it to be consensual so bad.
Commented "gross" and someone couldn't handle an opinion, reported it, and it was removed lol
Sorry to burst your bubble but this story is ass. This shouldn't be yaoi but horror. They're forcing men to be baby factories and raping them if they dont have a partner. They're performing human experiments, etc. If this was about women y'all would lose your shit. This story is disgusting.
Commented "gross" and someone couldn't handle an opinion, reported it, and it was removed lol
Sorry to burst your bubble but this story is ass. This shouldn't be yaoi but horror. They're forcing men to be baby factories and raping them if they dont have a partner. Theyre performing human experiments, etc. If this was about women y'all would lose your shit. This story is disgusting.
At first it was funny but now it's just turning into cringe writing
It's so... meh now... I was so into this until the last couple chapters
Very off topic but sometimes i wonder where u guys are from? If we met in real life i bet we’ll all hit off as good friends