This shows nothing else but the author's inability to be good at being an author. If you as a writer feel compelled to write a rape scene specifically when it add ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO THE PLOT justto make your story feel like it has some substance, its a depiction of you being extremely bad and almost inept to be writing a story and wasting people's time.
Get help, not just mentally but read more stuff first, then write small stories like a 10th grader with your beginners' talent, learn more, then try to call yourself and author. Overall you're not a talented writer but ig working hard and honing your skill before gloating like one can make you a good author in the future. Begin again from scratch that's all.
Seeing as you've blocked me, I'll just comment instead. It's a fact it's rape, it's not an opinion. You're objectively wrong and choosing to stay ignorant. Its not cute, it's honestly disturbing that you want it to be consensual so bad.
Commented "gross" and someone couldn't handle an opinion, reported it, and it was removed lol
Sorry to burst your bubble but this story is ass. This shouldn't be yaoi but horror. They're forcing men to be baby factories and raping them if they dont have a partner. They're performing human experiments, etc. If this was about women y'all would lose your shit. This story is disgusting.
Commented "gross" and someone couldn't handle an opinion, reported it, and it was removed lol
Sorry to burst your bubble but this story is ass. This shouldn't be yaoi but horror. They're forcing men to be baby factories and raping them if they dont have a partner. Theyre performing human experiments, etc. If this was about women y'all would lose your shit. This story is disgusting.
At first it was funny but now it's just turning into cringe writing
It's so... meh now... I was so into this until the last couple chapters
Very off topic but sometimes i wonder where u guys are from? If we met in real life i bet we’ll all hit off as good friends
Love how everyone was clocking it before Taehwa (probably misspelled his name) lmao
Also, that ex gf needs to chill
Maaan, this was so good and now it's just ass. Gotta make sure we make the top a rapist. Fucking hell, lemme guess. Seo is gonna forgive him and fall in love. Jayed doesn't even act remotely like he used to, he doesn't love Seo from how he's acting. He just wants a piece of his ass. Jayed... you're such a meathead pos now
gorgeous art, the bottom is so pretty. Wonder if it will end up being a throuple since the ML seems to have an ntr fetish
Romanticized rape again... top later says he did everything to "test" the bottom... the rape is never properly acknowledged. The author just pulled the whole "he had a hard on so it wasn't rape" shit. I like dark romance but this just isn't it
Wasn't even consensual nc, it was just non-con... I would break up over less wtf
The fuck you mean his body is worth looking at more than his face? His face is gorgeous, man is being a jerk just for shits and giggles















