So FREAKING INSANELY CUTEEE
Yeaaaaaaah i just re-read the whole thing across three days (≧∀≦)
Me too!! I keep coming back to read it
The writing and scripting is pretty childish. If you want to shoot for older audiences, it has to be more realistic than this. Like, every single think he does is narrated and a good story doesn’t need to be narrated “I said no to him but I felt bad”, I can tell and you said it 3 times already. Writing is not sophisticated like it should be for older audiences.
Dear @meruemshu ,
So sorry about my rude comment, although I don’t necessarily know what was rude about it. Would you please enlighten me? I also want to let you know that I had no foul intentions when replying to you. I am also a real person behind the screen and when you talk like that, it ruins someone’s day. Please don’t be the reason to make someone feel bad. You probably don’t care, but just a thought to consider.
Why am I writing all this you may say, well, I feel very horrible that I might have made you upset. I hope you see this. It’ll make me a little at ease.
Thank you.
“Because he is the Undefeatable god. I trust him” I am gonna cry. I love that quote so much. Love is trust. And ewwww that Jesus looking thing, how dare he say “after all I did for you” what??? Rape him?!?!
What do you mean chatterbox?? He spoke like 2 sentences, just like your messenger. Also, your absolutely disgusting, but church is even worse, so fight!!
This is what happens when sane people make BL, a loving masterpiece
Although I like the plot, I like the cuteness but that good plot and cuteness gets tampered when you know the couple met when one of them was under 10 and the other was an high schooler. It’s weird even tho he didn’t have any bad intentions, especially when he keeps bringing the kid up. He still does not have any feelings for that 30? 20? Something year old kid (the kid does tho). I feel like the author has a weird fetish because even the side couple has a huge age gap. Isn’t it weird when the couple look into their childhood photos and saying “I was in high school when you were just 8”. That’s so fucking disgusting. But why does the plot have to be good and interesting??? I would’ve dropped this if not for the good plot.
I am so grateful it is back, thank you a lot!