So far, there’s nothing likable about the uke
yeah, kind of hate him, as he's so heartless and care only for his love-obsession
the only thing thus far he could really be considered heartless over is not wanting to get involved with the bullied student.
"only"
ok, what else was "heartless"?
Am I the only one who can´t view the extra raw chapters? Some pages don't show at all no mater how long I wait. Does someone have the same problem?
Nevermind I see them now
This is one of those stories that makes your blood boil but you still read it in hope our MC grows some balls ......and brain cells
(why didn't he escape when he had the chance ffs)
Exactly sometimes I just want to jump into this manga and punch the MC and tell him to get out of that crazy house like bloody hell he is now alone with one of the brothers who fkin raped him.
As you can tell i am triggered right now!!
Literally all I care about right now is for oniichan to remove that mask and show his face
At least it won't take as many years as Kakashi in Naruto did
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This story is so half-assed
I’m Sorry, I just had to say it because it puzzles me how it’s at the top in Lezhin.
I want to love it as much as you guys but so far, 5 stars for the beautiful art and 1 star for plot. Anyone else feel the same?
Art isgood, plot is half baked but concept of thezero and all that is admittedly interesting. Characterization of the main plot characters is terrible but sihan and his boyfriend's is much better. A 4/5 on art, 2/5 on plot and setting and 2/5 on characterization
Worldbuilding is OK, plot is not that bad, but performance/storytelling is terrible. Storytelling can make the plot seems good or bad. Characters are so stereotypical, the spineless bottom and the arrogant top who will lose his arrogance because of the power of love. Yawn.
Nice art and shading. Nice fluff.
(continued) also.... I think the writers know that they are writing a terrible story, but they do it anyway because that's what the fans want. Most of us don't care about a good plot, but we care that OMG LUCAON IS HOT AND KYON IS CUTE AND THAT KISS IS SO SWEET AND FLUFFY!!
Bah, same for me. This story used to be kinda good at the start. Like it was just a normal story about a D/S relationship with lots of sex, throw in some funny moments. Cool. I'd take that. Plot happens slowly and is not focused on so I can overlook it.
Concept is veryyy interesting and the plot twist was a surprise. That part is also quite good, when we discover the truth about Kyon. But with the plot twist, the story has gone into a different direction, more plot-driven with everything on the table. I have high expectations when it comes to plot. THAT IS WHEN IT GOES TO SHIT.
Now the characters are all meeehhhh. They lost all the charms from the beginning. Everything is sluggish, nothing is happening nowadays and every chapter is a bore. I liked Kyon because he doesn't take shit from anyone, he stood up for himself, unless it's Lucaon then he's completely submissive. It's unhealthy, sure, but it gives him some unique characteristics. I liked Lucaon because I like men with dark pasts and Lucaon used to be a mystery, we barely know how he thinks. Same with how I liked Ryan, the funny servant guy (forgot his name, this is what happens when characters got introduced and has now disappeared). But now, I feel like all of them are out of character. Kyon is so whiny, Lucaon is blindly in love, Ryan is just wtf and everyone else is also wtf. Save for the side couple, I couldn't care less about them at first but now it seems like they are the only one sane and in character.
Storytelling is not a problem at first because it takes on a slow route. Bits of past stories now and then, some current events, but they all CONTRIBUTE to the plot. But then we have a very very important major event, a huge turning for the plot, and it's back to slow events in the presents that do not serve the plot at all. Like, you can just remove the few recent chapters and the story is still the same.
It's too much of fanservice for now. Sure, the story has always been fanservice, but that was BEFORE the main plot is introduced. If you go back to mindless fanservice after a plot point without expanding that plot, then you have a mess like this. Very boring.
I agree, seem like the author knows she is not doing a good job. In the Q&A she said she regrets a lot of things in her story. I can only hope that something would happen soon and the plot will be explored more. Hopefully this story will get its groove back on.
Guys it seems that chapter 33 and onwards have all been translated correctly!! Thank you so much. Sungho´s speech bubbles finally make sense now.
You're welcome :-)
The one major flaw with these types of stories is the predictable ending. Really sad actually. Seme easily forgiven, uke acting like one major sissy, no plot twists, their one dimensional personalities.... shall I go on? Nah （￣へ￣）
It's pretty boring
My thoughts exactly
Sincerely disappointed with the first story. I was hoping the next chapter would be the uke taking revenge for being raped and humiliated for such a stupid reason. The seme refused to work hard and yet was acting like the world owes him something just because he´s born an alpa and gets mad seeing an omega trying hard to make a name of himself, thus disrupting the social hierarchy. Gosh I just get so mad when someone puts a strong person down out of twisted jealousy and superiority. Both stories have weak ukes and no love. 2 stars from me
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exactly so unromantic and so unsatisfying
I was so furious reading the first story too , i totally agree with everything u said (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I ABSOLUTELY AGREEE!!