I knew it. MCs plans are too good and detailed, on the other hand, we don’t know what the antagonist is doing. If the audience know the plan, either the MCs or the villain, it won’t work.
I like this, the MCs aren’t OP, they experience set backs and damages. I’m looking forward to the next chapters
Bruh we skipped so many chemistry now that they’re older.
Their chemistry prior to the pirate situation is waaaaay better :/