Girl finished her revenge in less than 30 chapters!
Slay
Nooo I’m assuming he go beaten up! And he still rescued her on foot
GET ME A MAN LIKE THAT
I knew it.
MCs plans are too good and detailed, on the other hand, we don’t know what the antagonist is doing.
If the audience know the plan, either the MCs or the villain, it won’t work.
I like this, the MCs aren’t OP, they experience set backs and damages. I’m looking forward to the next chapters
Girl why are you collecting love interests like Pokémon?
I’m not even a love interest and I’m falling in love with your actions
Art is gorgeous
The story? Mmmm… to put it kindly, I prefer it if it has more depth.
Are you kidding me? It’s finished?
~{{Pacing?}}~
• It wasn’t milked, it wasn’t digging for more view(view=money)
>>10/10
~{{Love story?}}~
• Mature (not the spicy kind of mature), too peaceful to be realistic but still is, no second ML, no heartache, no jealousy.
>>10/10
~{{Back stories of the MCs?}}~
• Did no expect fl’s origin, did not expect the adoptive father’s origin, did not expect ml’s back story—it was new for me, his behaviour is so realistic due to his experience—, did not expect Tarsi’s backstory.
>>10/10
~{{Revenge?}}~
• Revenge wasn’t forgotten, this wasn’t even a revenge story but it was well delivered [Tarsi couldn’t even breathe], all the scum known in the story got punished
10/10
I don’t know about y’all, but this is a very satisfying and a very good story.
He’s obsessed YET respectful?!?!
Get me a man like thatლ(´ڡ`ლ)
I don’t know about yall, but I’m rooting for Winard.
Someone unobtainable, someone that isn’t but at the same time is a ML candidate.
It’s a good story, wish it wasn’t dumb down tho.
I think it’s either the poor translation or it is in fact dumb down
Welp, there you go.
Goodluck convincing Erudian to let you out the room minute you come back home. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I love the story so far. I wish there are stronger villains tho.
It’s nice seeing victorious MCs but the villains are too easy to be beaten :/
Other than that, 9.5/10
For two chapters this story has been so so chaotic
Then again, when has this NEVER been chaotic ahaha