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We are NOT gonna go in a jealousy arc. No. Stop. Don't be that toxic bitch ass person. It's not cute. You know better. Fuckin airhead.
It only makes sense, I guess. A partner who had a high sex drive hasn't had sex with him in six whole months, doesn't let him initiate either and add to that the number of men cheating when their wife is pregnant is quite high. Now he is seeing his partner with someone of opposite sex, he is quite sexually frustrated so there is no way he would take it calmly and rationally..
Probably one of the cutest consenting yaoi couple.
We need more consent like this, and plot that actually pulls us in, and humor.
I actually appreciate that this is just rape and not Stockholm syndrome into some bullshit love arc.
Rape is not okay, no, but at least it's not pretending to be romantic.
This is a story of a sort of game, the game being money.
And whomever can manipulate, torture, rape, and kill to the top is the winner.
I wish the sex was more consensual and less ultimatum.
But the story was rather interesting.
I wish it were longer, but I appreciate a short story too.
Some stories are so drawn out, that it's like "get to the fuckin point," and it's a point we all could see a world away.
But this was as an overall good story.
Bad guy was smart to not tell the guy that he killed the kids parents, he'd have died too.
His personality is as much of a dick as he has size of dick.
Like, Dan just stupidly lookin out for you, just stfu and heal your fuckin arm.
Why is it ALWAYS some insane debt collector.
That's what the IRS is for, not rapists
bc these dummies always take out loans from gangsters/loan sharks instead of a bank like a normal person
well they're usually dirt poor so their credit score is... close to none so the bank wouldn't give them a loan even if they wanted to ┑(￣Д ￣)┍