ngl his relationships with his grandma touched me a lot i wish the author focused more on this and especially his childhood and adolescence rather than just flashbacks it would've been greater to show in more depth the impact of his upbringing on his personality and relationship it almost felt like everything was brushed over just to drive the plot and the latter was already too loose to properly portray that side of him. overall the story lacks a lot of built it's like it's rushed and slow at the same time the sex scenes were drawn to perfection no doubt ig it was a mid read










i was never a fan of slow burn and yet i chose to suffer through it for their sake and this is what i get in return? i wasn't even looking forward to them ending up together mr mo deserves a happy love life, a significant other who's as loving and affectionate as him but not i had to sit down and watch him suffer through an unreciprocated love and FOR WHAT like what was the point of everything that happened since chap 1?? ik my life's shitty and it's fine but i read these works for a reason and that's to fulfill what i'm missing irl, now i'm feeling double the emptiness...