Putting spoiler tag to keep away possible one readers.....
The plot is good.
Romance: The romance is bit lackluster and rushed but the over all pace and the core identities of the main characters is solid. A depressed, traumatized MC and a borderline sociopath ML that got caught in his own trap. The progress is like. Acquiantances, colleages, FUBU, sparks in there and jumps into decent couple.. the jump is what feels rushed. But I get it why romance is the 2nd thought. It is action based bl. Action is really expressed and that is good.
Side characters: Scs are good! Arin is my favorite side charcter. Next by almost all core members of chord. They got a good team. Next if the side stories will explore of how chord build its strongest team. That would be nice.
The battles: Some battles lack the "X" factor to make it a bang.. like more fight scenes please!!.
but overall, it is fun to read. Also, I am so glad it is not an one man army action, it is team based and ML is aware. He cannot fight alone. He needs his team. Sorry to all one man overpowered MC lovers outta there but it becomes stale bread when the one main character is exposed too much power and being incorporated in plot and his crew ain't that near strong or impressive as MC.
And this got me so inttigued about having smex to clear one's head to help focus... is that really true??
Also read it in one go :)
strongly agree
and also confused and curious about the smex (well pretty sure not everytime going the inside but sexual things definitely happened)
Yeah... we ain't seeing the depth but i think it is for good reason. To keep the story intact and not to distract the readers away from the plot
I do not get ML at all... why does he kept on forcing MC but claims to hate him at a point cause he is the reason of his fall?? Like my guy, your act of revenge is like stockholm syndrome??
I have a good hunch that AF CEO is MLs mother... and again.. he claims she ruined him.
I need explanations..
And flashbacks to past MC
I still cannot forget about a comment on just how Heeseo had money all of the sudden???
He got a house in the middle of nowhere and is not struggling with money?? I want that level of security
This work is just promoting baby trapping. Ladies, if your man is doing this to you. Run as fast as you can!!!
Growe is one of a kind.. That level of control even when his fantasied partner is right there butt naked....
If this was in another story... a smex scene would totally be happening
The duchess Sheriden is the missing daughter of Marquis Krego, the one Rosalie is visiting...