
All yaois are unrealistic and make no sense but you forgive it for the porn and this story doesn't even have that.
The sex scene didn't make up for everything else. Nothing makes sense here and it really tried to get too deep that the only way for a good ending is that they stopped talking to each other.
It's unrealistic that they just all let it in the past and still talk to souma and that the other two magically fell in true love.
And I don't read yaoi for realism but this story was a little arrogant in how it presented itself as so deep and real. So the ending hit harder and it's a lot more difficult to forgive.
TLDR: bad story and not enough porn to make up for it.

Don't like don't read.
So simple and yet...

You really came all the way to idk what I age to post this? You must think it's a zinger.
It's not.
Your criticism is not needed.
Some sort of understanding of how a story is not reality might be a better use of your time. Since, you know, this is a whole other universe in which this is not even a person but a whole other being whose sole purpose is to provide sex. Applying the rules of a human to something that is not just to sound woke is honestly not smart.
Just enjoy the story for what it is or leave if you don't and let others enjoy.
The problem is not that you can't critique, you're not commenting on anything. You don't like rape? Wow awesome, no one does irl, or when it's actually portrayed as rape in a story. But in this story sex is a whole other issue, so, idk it's just coming here to blab about rape cause you have to, cause you can't not stay quiet even if the comment doesn't fit.
Cause you have to bring down everyone else that's enjoying the story, even tho they are the ones that can see and differentiate reality from fiction and that world from ours.
And if your answer to this is 'rape bad' yeah again, no duh.
- This is a whole other universe and none are human.
- rape was definitely not portrayed in a positive light in this story.

But there is rapists irl? So. Some ppl DO enjoy it?
Also, from the rape-criticisers' point of view, apologetics like you bring down the mood as well. Thats not an argument not to critique. Same way it isnt one to point out that fiction isnt reality, bcs like i said initially- both influences one another.
If the characters portrayed are human or not, doesnt change much either, bcs even if we would argue that it only matters what they think, in their own universe geumso's rape was still depicted as something bad, so i dont really know where u were going with this? However thats not a logically sound argument anyway, so the focus remains: while its a worl of fiction, rape is very real and portraying it in any way causes certain connotations in readers. And i am not even getting started on what a sad overused trope it is in yaoi.

I meant your 'don't like don't read' stuff as the zinger. The other thing is just you reading something from school and knowing it's smart and trying to apply it here. Or you read it on some other comment and now you spam it everywhere idk.
There's rapists irl? Yes? So?
your answer was honestly 'rape bad' I told you to not even try to answer with that.
You didn't get that the rape here was depicted as bad as one of my arguments either, cause you're throwing it at me. Yeah, that's a point as to why rape here is completely diferent than when it its used as trope. Please read an argument before trying to counter.
Reapers are sinners, maybe he was a child molestor what about that then?
I can throw theoreticals too.
In terms of story he is not human, he was made for sex to make up for his sins. He is a sinner. We don't know his sins as readers, so maybe let's wait to see where this is going.
in reality he's a cartoon. He he no feelings, don't project to a cartoon, that's bad for you cause then you can't even read nuances in stories.
Fated pairs are not even that meaningful in this universe cause most alphas don't bond because they need to breed.
Will is horrible.