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Yeahhhh me i think it was too much going on

My mind went like 'what the hell I'm reading' to 'wow whoever edited the sound effects and other texts did an amazing a job' lol

Was it their first kiss? After seeing it I was trying to look at previous chapters to see if they kissed while fucking, like in the heat of the moment type of thing.

Yes it was because Seo yechan was actually crying while screaming that Chani kisses everyone but him and asked why and if he, Chani, saw him as less than a human, more like a dildo and only wants him for his dick. He was very emotional and demanded that Chani see him as he really is.

I don't think that he is a dominant alpha

Maybe but he's still young and a teenager so who knows.

No he’s a dominant alpha it was stated in the parents story

Pls pls spoil it for me?

Yes spoile me too about the raws

Sure but it's just a short, short summary.







- Bottoms elaborates a plan to escape with the help of the girl caddie, for a price, and he's successful. He takes with him all the money he saved.
- He has a job as a construction worker, covering his face to avoid being recognized. Every day when he returns to a room he is renting, he counts his money, which is safely locked in a wardrobe. He lives in peace but at the same time, he avoids people or having close relationships. He even goes to visit his mother at the hospital.
- Later, in his room, bottom receives a strange white package but doesn't open it and he learns some information about his uncle and what he has been doing with the money he send it and other things. So he goes to his old house to look for something, but before that, he notices that the same white package, which disappeared from his room, appeared in his old house so he opens it. For his terror and surprise, the content was him. A lot of photographs of him in his daily life. Now he knows he has been followed all the time.
- Then, Top makes his dramatic entrance and orders his henchmen to capture him. One even hurt Bottom which Top reacts by attacking that henchmen in the legs.
- Bottom's taken to Top's home, where he is put under surveillance, with cameras everywhere. Bottom knows he's being watched, he knows where the cameras are, but tries to live, even if he's submitted to the same treatment, a bit lesser maybe, that he was submitted at the hotel.
- Some things happens, related to his uncle, the one who helped and covered for him when he killed his father, and again, the money he was sending to him to pay his debt and hospital expenses, that Bottom's depression and desperation took the best of him and he took a drug he was hiding, one he took from the Top without his knowledge and that the bottom was planning to use it for something, and tried to kill himself.
- I have to mention that prior that, Top was somewhat courting Bottom with clothes, taking him to dinner, buying other stuff like a book shelf and lots of books, which where received with gratefulness by Bottom. He was actually happy to receive that present, he thought that maybe something was changing. But if Bottom says the 'wrong' thing, something that Top misinterpret as rejection, Top reacts violently like always. Bottom was already feeling tired and depressive. That's when he receives the news about his uncle and the money. He's having hallucinations at that time too and that's when he took the drug.
- Anyway, Top watched in his cellphone Bottom's actions via monitoring the cameras at his home and even wondered what the Bottom was doing. He watched the Bottom unconscious, that's what he thought, at the floor and he reacts sending help. But Bottom was having some psychopathic hallucinations where those bloody shadows were cornering and trying to reach him. Bottom was scared and when he was about to surrender himself, Top comes to his rescue. Bottom clings to him, crying, out of his mind, and Top carries him to bed where he injects him some medicine. Bottom tries to hug him, Top starts to yell and they exchange some words that surprised and moved Top. Top kisses Bottom tenderly, and for the first time, Bottom asks to have relations. He was feeling aroused, maybe as an effect of the drug. They do it normally too.
- Top is seen taking care of Bottom, injecting him medicine, having sex and letting him rest at what I think is Top's bed. Bottom talks about his experiences, what happened in his past, what he did to his father, and they discover they have more things in common. Top's past is explained in the course of the story, why he uses the ring and the scars in his hand. Bottom takes that same hand between his and there's a tender moment between them under the sunlight at his apartment. It heavily implied trough the story that Top is aware of Bottom's past too.
- Top captures Bottom's uncle, harvest an organ from him, and let him chained in some place. Top recovers the money that the Bottom was sending to his uncle. I think that's the thing he went to look for when he visited his old house, the bank book, I could be wrong. Uncle is taken away alive as petition from Bottom to the Top.
- Top and Bottom starts a more loving relationship where Bottom actually feels good to initiate sex and he's comfortable with Top's touch. Top is seen behaving more calmly, he talks more, seems lees annoyed and they seem to be in good and stable terms.
- But Bottom is still a presioner in that home with cameras everywhere. There's some important dialogue about preys and predators. He was watching a show but starts feeling lonely, bored or tired of the cameras, so he goes to I think is Top's personal office or study, which he thinks he's more comfortable because he hasn't found any CCTV, and starts reading a book he took from the book shelf that Top gifted him He was so distracted in his thoughts, he still feels that Top someday is gonna get tired of him, that when the doors opened, he hit his knee in the arm of the sofa/chair, hurting himself. Top arrives, they talk a bit, Bottom is seen blushing more and more at Top.
- Top makes a remark about how it's possible for Bottom to have a bruise like that by hitting himself in the chair, if he is a kid or something. Bottom tries to apologize but then he went silent and asks Top about how did he knew about him hitting himself in the knee.
- Top gets serious, mentions that it's for security, that it's in silent mode or something. Bottom's yells at him asking where's the camera and he realizes that there's is a hidden camera in the book shelf that Top gave him. The one he was so happy to receive. Not even a gift is free of his total control. He hasn't changed at all.
- Top tries to explain in a calmly almost indifferent manner why there's a camera there but then, he sees Bottom's horrified face and asks him why he looks like that.

It gets published every week I think and there're things I couldn't understand so take this with a grain of salt.

Omg thank u so much, I hope ur pillow stays cool throughout the night and u find money on the ground next time u go outside

Omg thank you so much for the thorough run down! I think I'd buy this development uve told us about more if so many chapters werent spent on the top just being a piece of trash. But it is yaoi in the end, so not terribly surprised

New chapter show us that Top actually planted hidden cameras even in plants that were gifted by him to decorate Bottom's mom hospital room, to keep him in check. 'Honeymoon' phase didn't last long than a sneeze. Top's horrible.

Also, I'm not so sure if the man who helped him with his father's death, the one I was calling his Uncle in my previous post, the one whose organ was harvested and taken away by Top's henchmen, was his uncle or someone else like the drugdealer that gave him the fake ID or anyone else. But either way, he was someone who knew Bottom's past and even helped escape the hotel. He betrayed Bottom's trust tho and paid the price.

New chapter show us Bottom talking with someone (telephone) and I think uncle is alive? They're talking about Top and upon realizing something, Bottom's made some decision and confronts him.

I don't expect any redemption to be honest. It's kind of interesting to see how fucked up Top is. There aren't manystories where one is beyond salvation and stays like that till the end. But I do feel sad for Bottom's. His whole life was bad enough.