eh I guess it's fine
boring though
idk I kinda wanted more spice maybe a scene where she actually like leaves and he chases or something
but it's just a short smut story so w/e
Thatll be weird cause why would HE be the one to leave and chase her
It should be him leaving her cause shawty was stalking him and doing the stuff ( although he did say he was spying on her ) but like yk
bc that's boring as hell and she was the one with the inner monologue about needing to leave cause she got caught stalking him while his inner monologue was about keeping her around?
I didn't think it was that complicated
why'd the authors note low-key scare me what u mean u want 1 chapter to be sweet from start to end... girl what u got planned for the rest.....
how is he so upset that she's matching his energy like ugh calm down loser she's just cooler, hotter, sexier, funnier, and a better actor than you
I didn't see any similarities between this and her last story cus I read 3 panels total and closed the chapter see y'all when there's actual development
No honestly alex’s personality is waaaaay better than jk
o ya for sure this one is def her feeding into a more toxic male lead cus Alex was like a pale red while the ml for this one is bright fucking red and awful
I don't even hate the story but the sex scenes do nothing for me when the MC isnt into it so I literally just scrolled all the way to the bottom and moved on lmao hopefully we get into an actual improvement arc soon sigh
meh
man doesn't communicate at all doesn't show their similarities and why he saved her doesn't help make her feel secure at all and then when she initiates sex out of fear of losing her place he takes advantage of it and then asks to be called master
Another story of a man doing the bare minimum yippeee
why do they always ruin these stories with the fl lead omitting details and making it so sketchy on her part for literally no reason other than a plot device
why would she hide who it's from? why is she embarrassed to just say oh I broke up with my ex and his mom doesn't know I guess, we were close when I was dating him. like come on man it's so lazy
also like I can't even get mad at him even though his first comments were unnecessary as hell he's prob scared jealous and feels trapped cause now he's in a situation where he can't act on the feelings he was getting the signals that they were mutual cause it'll fuck up his living situation if she kicks him out so he feels shitty and can't even do anything about it
it's so rare for me to pick a man's side over a woman that's how u know she fucked this up bad
omfg chapter 35 when he said do I have a thing for women staring down on me while blushing I just done fell in love I need this man NEOW
I love Barbara so much... the FL is good too but I need more Barbara screen time
I actually like the fl
I need this story to up the pegging though
imma need to see his dick STAT im so sorry for the woman I'm about to be when the sex scenes drop lord forgive me in advance