It's not a love triangle, its a Fucked up Sandwich at this point, rest in piece mc....
Read it out of curiosity of the wild first pages... What the fuck is wrong with this story, Ahjin life is only suffering what the heck... Reading this is hella painful... And fuck the ML, genuinely. Of all the people, Ahjin was the only one real with him frfr. He saw how pure and genuine he was, discovering pop soda and chocolate, how did he think he would do all that, especially with his bad leg !? This is so forced imo... Honestly, this sucks, cuz if the tone was set better and it ended with Ahjin's dead, then it would mean something. Here, its pain and empty, the characters are ruined and I dunno how you can continue...
Story ? Ass. Characters ? Ass. Chapters ? Ass. Trope ? Hella ass. Never explained how he can do the hypnosis, he can get anyone to do what they want, the mind breaking and nasty conditioning. The only sane character getting ruined dirty, the bullshit deus ex machina every time to lead into them fuckin... This manages to be worst than a regular hypnosis doujin. At least those are straight to the point with no bs dramatic romantisation... And the fact that great artists/authors were glazing this at the end... (I was hoping both the ml and the mc to die to end the pain of this on a dark note, that would have been far more interesting.) (︶︿︶)凸
The plot's all over the place lmaooo what is this...
Tho the ml looks like Goldbullet, its disturbing lmaoooo
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Goddamn bullshit
Son of a bitch, what the hell?
Oh motherfucker, goddamn bullshit, holy shit (Holy shit)
Oh holy shit, bullshit, goddamn motherfucker (Motherfucker)
Oh fucking bastard, goddamn, fucking shit (Oh fucking shit)
Son of a motherfucking bitch, oh shit
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Holy shit, oh fucker
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Goddamn bullshit
Son of a bitch, what the hell?
Oh motherfucker, goddamn bullshit, holy shit (Holy shit)
Oh holy shit, bullshit, goddamn motherfucker (Motherfucker)
Oh fucking bastard, goddamn, fucking, fucking shit (Oh fucking shit)
Son of a motherfucking bitch, oh shit
Oh motherfucker, goddamn bullshit, holy shit (Holy shit)
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Son of a motherfucking bitch, oh shit (Oh fucking shit)
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Oh yeah
Fuck ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Carol and tuesday???
Yeah lol but i was really confused seeing this in the top main page so i had to do a bit of funny
Lol thanks for the laugh homie and whoever downvoted this comment need to get locked in mental asylum
Not even considering the fuck up of the 'setting', Even for a pwp, it should have at least more dialogue and "depth" that this shit... Also the ml face is so scary bro looks like hisoka or dio when they go wild ...