Not even considering the fuck up of the 'setting', Even for a pwp, it should have at least more dialogue and "depth" that this shit... Also the ml face is so scary bro looks like hisoka or dio when they go wild ...
It's not a love triangle, its a Fucked up Sandwich at this point, rest in piece mc....
Read it out of curiosity of the wild first pages... What the fuck is wrong with this story, Ahjin life is only suffering what the heck... Reading this is hella painful... And fuck the ML, genuinely. Of all the people, Ahjin was the only one real with him frfr. He saw how pure and genuine he was, discovering pop soda and chocolate, how did he think he would do all that, especially with his bad leg !? This is so forced imo... Honestly, this sucks, cuz if the tone was set better and it ended with Ahjin's dead, then it would mean something. Here, its pain and empty, the characters are ruined and I dunno how you can continue...
(I approve of Old men x Monsterboys, very yum, + nice he's hairy...)