
I'm still in chapter 12. Some thoughts
1.Too fast paced for her (Mc's) psyche to adapt. She literally acts and talks like another person, has no signs of Ptsd or at least some kind of severe anxiety, for her background as someone 'who has been abused for that long', she would surely experience symptoms of panic attacks at least. Idk it's just sloppy author work here.
For now she makes no signs of personal development too, this would've made the story so much more interesting if she was also trying to heal from the abuse she got in the other life.
2. Ml's too trusting and too fast at it, this also doesn't match the original setting. Bro is said to have spys around him etc etc and he just trusts a random woman who shows up and has some interest in him? Lol. He's not 12 to fall for such tricks, if he was truly coveted by many women as it is said they surely would've tried many methods, and him having no hesitation/doubts about her just makes no sense.
It's written like a fairytale, come here to another world and all your struggles will be solved. Boo-hoo.
I'll update when I catch up to the rest of the chapters

Incesty incesty...even though they are not blood related this is still messed up. And I also don't like how Lucian acts(I will lock you up wooo~, be scared of me) and that everyone's falling for her(with her being just a dumb potato), It's kinda meh.
Also doesn't she think her brother's actions are weird? He's a grown adult lol, sis people don't act all touchey with their brothers
What's with her outfit?
'Modest yet not too much'
Did the maid think she'd look better as a gypsy or something What's that bwhahah