ML is fcking trash!! what an asshole! he knows exactly how mc feels about him but he's out here toying with literally everyone's feelings. hes an obsessive manipulative psycho!! mc is also frustrating ngl.. I need a new love interest like right now! fck this asshole I'm so pissed
characters and story are all messed up... but now I need to know how it ends. What this "relationship" could even turn into because ml practically r*ped mc in the first chapter
every time a new chapter is uploaded I keep hoping maybe the writing will get better and we'll see a better turn of events or something.... but no, I should stop getting my hopes up
I hope Habibi doesn't fall for his bullshit! it's obviously hard to believe, and he's trying to use her confusion to manipulate her in letting them go. what a bastard!
his parents were such good people. they didn't deserve to die like that!! I hope he finds those fcking wizards and gives them the most slow and painful death possible!!
mc sure is shameless!! why not tell him exactly what happened? why did you heartlessly break up with him if you were gonna gonna date him again? I hope ml randomly gets his memory back, realizes what a dick mc was, and then leave him.
I had originally left a comment after the first 15 chapters about how awful this was, and how hard it is to read it... I'm writing this now after reading the latest 10 or so chapters, and I must say, the unraveling of the backstory is impressively good. the story started off super fcked up, but unlike many other rape-and-torture-for-the-sake-of-rape-and-torture, there is actually a plot and an engaging story. I won't justify blonde's actions, but from the looks of it he's barely even human - made in a lab for the sake of experiments, he's like a robot that's slowly learning how to be human. As we have seen, MC is basically scum and has done all kinds of wrong you can think of.. what's both interesting, and at the same time upsetting, is MC's internal monolog. it appears even after all he's gone through, he hasn't learned his lesson and remains an asshole in his core. Now that he's learning more about the blonde, I wonder if he's going to take advantage of his nativity and manipulate him. Red hair wants revenge, so he's not happy with how things have turned out because MC's spirit hasn't been broken. Overall, I'm happy with how the story is unfolding so far, the writing is good.
I'm still having a hard time following what exactly has been happening. I feel like the story is all over the place and author is going in circles.. I'm sure I've read every chapter, but somehow missed when exactly they got together?!? and since when was he so into BDSM? everything is so random and all over the place I feel like. ML is trash and obsessive.. and they don't have any chemistry. I keep reading to clear up my confusion but I get more confused each time lol
what a shitty development. I wanted to like Garam and support him standing up for himself, but that barely lasted a day clearly. seme has no redeeming quality.. how can you be so weak to just a pretty face and a big dick?? no redemption arc, no proper distancing, nothing.. and he's already back in his pants
probably the best thing I've done, for the sake of my mental health I was hoping to pick it back up once things got better?! but based on the comments, that doesn't seem to be the case