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Good to see the omega filling omega stereotypes by being a complete idiot constantly. I'm mean..... Could probably get a government appointed live in helper level of moronic. Forget Britney Spears, this man needs mandated guardianship.

Also, does he suddenly not have work, school, or defaulting loans anymore? He sure seems to have an awful lot of free time all of a sudden.

Only 19 chapters up so far but honestly the story seems extremely contrived. I find myself rolling my eyes at every turn. It couldn't be more predictable or cliche. Omega is dumb, gullible, forgives just cuz, (enter in about 5 other typical uke/omega tropes).

Literally everyone but the main couple. Every other single person in this story were trash. Except maybe Hansol's parents. But everyone else, straight garbage. I hate his mother/not mother, his father, his brother, his entire family, the doctor, Hansol's siblings (although I can at least understand their motivations), everyone.

You can't redeem your chosen main love interest because you've made him such a piece of shit so you're going to attempt to make him likeable again by being like, "But see how sweet, attentive, and loving he's been towards Woohoo his entire life? He's always taken care of and loved him!!!"
:enter eye roll:
It's definitely not clever. I also find it funny how many authors clearly want an incest relationship but end up shying away from it. Just how many fucking times do we need to re-mention that they're not blood related? At least once every three chapters? We get it, youre too afraid to write an incest story

Like, omega verses seem especially allergic to the idea. Honestly, harems in yaois in general are actually kind rare, but omega verses seem to be in utter denial that the omega, not the alpha, could have a harem. Don't tease us with a harem and then give us an extremely typical and run of the mill mono relationship. Should sue authors who do that, but alas, I'm not paying to read these

But it's not terrible. At least, not as terrible as a lot of shit tastic omega verses out there.
The artist isn't a master at their craft. Things are a bit weird here and there with the bodies,but human bodies are damn hard and this person drew 45 chapters (and hopefully counting) of a story which is a lot more than a lot of people can say. And it's honestly not terrible either. Just someone who is still working on improving their craft. Can't fault that.
As far as alphas go, he's definitely not as bad as many alphas or popular semes out there. He's still trash for a while in the story, but that's more of an interesting reflection of the universe this story is set in, and not so much as a core character flaw. A lot of omega verses say they have universes like this but either lean in to them extremely too heavily (with literal condoned child rape) or write characters that seem to not have been raised in such a setting. In this case, you get a more balanced display of how everyone was affected living in this type of society. (Although Seolu's family leans more towards that oddly extreme side for no apparent reason).
It's not a great story like Omega Complex, but it's actually a lot better than a lot of others out there imo.


Also, I had better get to see some babies damn it!

Lastly, authors really don't understand biology or evolution. Why is it so many authors when they write omega verses make it cannon that male omegas HAVE to have C-sections? Like, if that was the case, there wouldn't be any male omegas. They'd have died out long before modern medicine because every single one would have died during child birth.
The argument could be made that they have a higher rate of C-sections, but not that all of them absolutely require one.

The reverend and mob boss knew each other and knew where MC was the entire time. They knew the MCs story. The. Entire. Time. Remember, the reverend KNEW Seo was looking for MC. At any point in time the reverend could have told Seo what happened to MC 15 years ago, how hard MC struggled to find him, how he joined a gang to get more resources to find him, and tell Seo where he currently was. The reverend had ALL that information. You know, very big important things you would normally word vomit on someone who went totally missing that you were in charge of who randomly turned up alive and fine one day.
Instead he kept his mouth shut. Didn't say shit.

Also..... Shouldn't the reverend be in jail and what not for losing Seo? Maybe his job connections kept him free

I'm not even caught up yet. Only in the 40s rn. But holy hell. This story jumps around so much and leaves you wondering if incomplete chapters have been uploaded. But no, that's just how it is. Some things can be chalked up to possibly poor translations, but not everything, but what just happened takes the cake in this poorly thought out plot and timeline.

MC literally refuses to go back with the ML because he fears for the little boy and his mother's life. ML conceeds and leaves MC behind only to have him delivered to him a week later in full heat under the rise of having him sold to some old alpha who needs an alpha heir.
But, he still has no idea where the MCs mother is or the child?! IT WAS LITERALLY POINTLESS. He could have just taken the MC home with him by force, forced him not to take the suppressants, and been in the exact same situation. He still doesn't know where the mother and boy are, so they can still easily die because the MC is missing. Like..... What?!

This level of incoherently poor writing takes the cake for the bad writing I've seen recently. Not the worst thing I've ever read, but pretty damn near close. Like.... What?!

I love omega verses, and this thing has an incredibly high star rating which suggests it's good. However I have absolutely zero tolerance for characters who do unredeemable acts to their "loved one" and then a bad author glazes over that or uses cheap tricks like amnesia or (it would seem) in this case a reincarnation. Authors who must somehow strong arm in a way for the terrible human being to be able to get around his unforgivable acts to be able to get a happy ending that in the real world, everyone would be in agreement of that they do not deserve.

From what I can see of the first two pages of comments, this poor writing trick seems to be exactly what happened. The ML appears, from what I can gleam, to have treated the MC in the most atrocious of ways in a past life, realized he was trash, and simply was able to try again. He may have learned from his mistakes but that is different from repenting and paying for his sins. It sounds that he simply uses what he learned to gain the MCs heart the second time around, but did he ever actually pay for his sins and misdeeds? Knowing what I know of so many yaoi authors, I suspect not. Not in a way people would usually demand in any other medium.

Well, this is really just me expressing my concerns about the writing before even reading it. Please, if this is how it actually is, save me the time of reading 90+ chapters and tell me now. I cannot stomach another story so poorly written. If this is not the case, then I would give it a read.

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Is that it's because the story is actually so incredibly life like that it's frustrating for those seeking escapism. This author isn't good with bdsm, at all. I'll give everyone that. Their other story is complete trash with bdsm, which I said in my comment on that story.

However this piece is so close to the real world that I think it makes a lot of people uncomfortable because theyve come here seeking an escape from that. However in the real world there is abuse without fulfilling endings. There is catastrophic levels of lack of communication. There is quick one sided judgements made by people who will never take the time to learn the real truth. There are cycles of trauma that can be nearly impossible to break and often require great sacrifice to do so.

This is no masterpiece, but the author has a lot more going for this story than the majority of stories out there. People are just having trouble seeing that and appreciating it because they've come to this story expecting it to fulfill their desires for how they wish things to pan out, but what they wish for is fantasy, and this gives us a much more real representation of life and relationships.

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He's a bit of a breath of fresh air. He's smart-ish, stubborn, has a backbone, sharp tongued. I like his personality.
But man was it a fucking slog to get through him constantly being surprised by the man he's in a f*ckb*ddy relationship with wanting sex. Or him constantly deluding himself into thinking that asshole had feelings for him. Or when he kept going back to him after quitting his job.
I will say though, even though it was a bit of a slog, it's nice to see a realistic depiction of a messy relationship from messy people. I love how he isn't immediately falling over himself to forgive or excuse the seme's behavior during this chase arch too. He is 100% still angry, still spiteful, holding the man accountable, and not giving him an inch. Just as any normal person would actually do.

I can't put this down because it's so refreshing to see a uke/switch with real personality, backbone, and an axe to grind.

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This is great. I like it a lot. This is a good one