Me: Wow this couldn't get any worst, I said with joys!
Little did I know...
Season 2: Dog draft.
LUKA FROM ALNST MENTIONED!!!
Low-key, I think the loop hole is just a metaphor of a top being into full blown psychosis and his really in mental hospital being diagnosed of delusional disorder
I would be fr diabolically crash out and went into psychosis if I hear my ex for 6 years who ghosted me and call me having sex with someone
The author is so evil for the cliffhanger ╥﹏╥
q is being starved apparently
The monochrome diary was really peak in the first place. The story was focusing on the MC's diary or plot because it's called monochrome diary in the first place right? It was the mc writing his feelings in his diary and telling to us of how he fall in love and how he show his feelings to his first love, the story focus should be them!
Okay sure you can add the uke back story about his traumatizing experience and how a shit hole his life is but the real thing is you shouldn't just focus on the uke misery and milk the fuck out of it. Instead let him develope a character development and cut ties with the people hindering his life but no! The author decided to make the story even more miserable and just focuses on it forgetting the story purpose!
Not to mention there's a lot of unnecessary scenarios that shouldn't be added or came back in the first place. Plus there's a really lot of plot holes in the story and not important background characters that just add salt in the wound it's a complete bullcrap.
The misunderstanding between the mc and the uke is a never ending loop too. I don't like the story nor I hate it but the way the author just focuses on the uke misery, and the mc being an idiot, instead of making both of them DEVELOPE a character development is just a clown show.
Hot take: The story has a lot of potential to be fluff but instead the author decided to make the story toxic because toxic story tend to be more popular
And the funny thing is the reason it’s more popular is just cause people hate in it , every-time I see a popular toxic yaoi more then half the people are shitting on the plot and ml . Shit is stupid
I agree and disagree, on a surface level it could’ve just been fluff but the way the story was set up (and I mean backstory wise with Jiho, his personal relationships, and his character itself), there’s no way this story could be fluff if it were to be well-written and deep.
In general though, you are right that toxic stories are more popular, nothing wrong with that though as long as it’s well-written
Yes the uke back story is a pain in the ass and since they are just high schooler and don't know any better it's hard to sort things out. But in general the story has a really a lot of potential to be fluff if the uke knows how to play his card rights and not to indulge on his ego and anger so much but rather to think everything thoroughly. Plus the misunderstanding between the mc and the uke make the story much worst in the surface personally there's a lot of necessary scenarios in the story that should never been came back in the first place, the author tend to milk of the uke misery and then again the seme misunderstands everything with no ending loop . I don't know why some authors of yaoi stories like to make the uke life miserable so much but whatever makes the story stay float and popular I guess.
Ur an idiot
People really be complaining how fuck up this shit is and keep blaming the author but also keep reading every chapters that is uploaded fucking dumbasses. If a story has immorally ambiguous themes YOU know aren't right in real life then maybe you shouldn't be consuming fictions at all, and stay in your safe zone and don't be some dumb fucks complaining and hating the author. I don't care what anyone says but you have to separate fiction with reality.
"oh you like that you must do that in real life too!" Lmfao stop projecting bro.
it's funny how youre limiting the author because inappropriate lmao girl this story purpose is to make you uncomfortable so don't read it if you don't feel safe! you can't js limit a fiction yk? fiction exist to surpassed the reality in the first place. Go read encyclopedia or something.
I done care what anyone but I'm pro anything goes with fiction. There are themes that I personally wouldn't touch but I honestly dgaf if you do.
Wait I've never heard someone say immorally ambiguous before. Like morally ambiguous but u want it to be more on the immoral than moral side? I'm sorry i just kinda love this concept
I feel like the author is experienced(⊙…⊙ )
This felt too real, I can relate to this lmao HAHAHAHA