This one's a bit of a headache, too many different heavy plot-twisting clichés overlapping together to happen to one single protagonist, but without even being connected to one another: secret hidden past, amnesia (but not related to secret hidden past), time-travel (but not related to amnesia nor to hidden past). It's too densely packed with coincidences
"Hate you if you give up on me, hate you too if you don't..." Dear ML, dude, it's one thing to do stupid things bc you're inlove, and another to have these drastic mood swings... And the mc's one of those people still willing to follow someone's rollercoaster pace, so OF COURSE you'd come to like him. But, pick ONE mood already... or take your meds, or sth.
Chloe is starting to sound Mary Sue-ish... The 12-year-old baby cousin is smarter indeed.
I mean, even some random wizard woman stops to say "I don't like anyone, but I like this woman." Ok, author. We geeeeeet it already. "Chloe is so lovable, that everyone just looooves Chloe"... No need to keep heavily-handedly pushing the message down us readers' throats. It's starting to get irritating.









Let's all give an APPLAUSE for the MIRACULOUS RETURN OF MIRROR-NEPTHYS!!
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It took her forever (4 years after she was last seen in the story, back in 2020) and even *the author* forgetting about her... but girl's FINALLY made it!!! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ (≧∀≦) (≧∀≦)
damn this story has been going for a LONG time