The problem isn't that this story is too long it's because they are concentrating on the wrong couple. Rather than this incest shit I rather see the CEO and his secretary boyfriend story. Or maybe even the cousin's wedding line and how she will deal with her in-laws. I rather have a totally new couple.
But what they are giving is almost incest. No one wanted A to be gay. No one knew A. Why is he getting the most time now?
Trueeee.. they are too focusing on a not-so-known couple. Even the doctor-bro was nonexistent before but now he is kinda temporarily MC lol
For me, I’m most curious about the gay-celebrity and the seme-CEO’s secretary relationship!
The secretary seems oblivious at first, but suddenly he keeps imagining our muscles cutie pie. Like, how?? What happened in between???
I want detaaaaails!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
No hate
But everything in this manhwa is so easily achieved. It's like child's play whenever there's a problem. No mystery or danger.
It's disappointing because the plot is so interesting I just it was written better.
The characters feel one dimensional and talk in such a robotic way.
It feels like a newby wrote it. And I know cause I used to write like this. It's hard to write organic dialogues that doesn't sound forced.
But because of this it's so hard for me to get into.
I know I will get hate for this. But remember it's just my opinion not fact
So it's a very unique and interesting concept. This must the first bl I read that went this deep into the iselai gami concept. I loved that it had so many twists and turns.
However....it might have had too many twists and turns.
The story never gave us time to process any of the plot twists. One after another without any break felt too much. And because of the fast speed it never got the chance to explore it's theme properly. Maybe it the point but all the characters really felt like NPCs(Even Nigel). The didn't feel cohesive and there actions were random as if the author decided on a new plot twist and forced the characters to act in a certain way to make that plot happen. After sometime I didn't care what happened just wanted to see the ending.
Also the chemistry between Nigel and Edna is nonexistent until chapter 38. They never felt like that had actual feeling for eachother. It felt forced and awkward.
The entire story felt like "Why is this happening? Because the Author said so"
The prince is a total red flag to me. He doesn't even consider the uke's feelings. He keeps saying "This isn't our first meeting for me tho" "I want you to live with me" " I want you to have my babies".
It's always about him. The uke is calmly saying he wants it slow and is ok with the marriage after love. But the prince wants everything now. He is acting like a child. Throwing a tanturn after realising his demands don't work on everybody.
I wish there would be character development but I have read too many manhwas to know there would only be character assassination of the uke. The prince will not change but the uke will become dumb and forgive anything his baby prince husband does.











I m cryingggggg!
This has become my fav bl manga now(≧▽≦)