ugh idk about this story
it's angsty but in a really frustrating way
i feel like it'll be drama coming or going. alpha's gonna be the biggest dick until the beta finally accepts that they're over after having been hurt beyond all recognition, then alpha will regain his memories and go insane at what he did and there'll be a shoehorned happy ending where forgiveness and mental health recovery happens automagically
even if someone didn't mean to hurt you it doesn't change the fact that they did
these kinds of drama drama drama stories where there's literally no surcease are for a very specific audience and i'm not sure that's me lol
the story is good and at first the antagonism between the guide and esper was interesting but it's dragged on so long i think the author is going to really struggle with having some kind of romance make sense
once you stop caring about someone that's it, it's done
if they're going for an unreliable narrator situation (ie mc is lying to himself) they're not doing it right bc there's no indication of that in his internal narrative, which will make a sudden revelation seem like it's coming out of nowhere
obviously now that the guide doesn't care about the esper he'll suddenly start to care more or whatever but it just feels too little too late
disappointing
You forget to consider event that changes the MC's view on things. It the event is good enough, it can be a forgiveable plot.
I don't think the event can be a life save thing. They do that all the time.
So it will have to be the top gaining more of a conscious and being accountable for his actions and behavior.
So I'm betting slow burn so we can see actually growth.











they're so freaking cute
and ngl i love the insane sister, she's great
taira is still my fav, i hope he gets his man (spinoff spinoff spinoff)