This was cute but I feel like because of the short length, everything jumped around with no real flow or consistency. Like they went from penetration with no prep to him putting on the lingerie to the foreplay that should’ve happened in chapter 2 happening in chaps 3 and 4 and idk, it just feels like the scenes were out of order.
I get that this is just hentai with no plot needed but y’know, I think that there was missed potential. (Also the top should’ve swallowed the nut.)
“You’re gonna follow him?” That’s his fucking boyfriend of course he is, wtf do you mean?! I can’t stand this bitch!
Like he must be actually regarded. Yeonwoo ran off in tears, knowing him we were all thinking that he’s about to jump off a building and end himself and Hyuk is like “Yes. This is the perfect time to confess my undying love.” Oh yeah, Hwibum will totally be so happy to hear that while he’s scared out of his mind about where his boyfriend, who’s in the middle of an emotional breakdown, ran away to. He’s totally gonna jump into your arms now, and live happily ever after with you, Hyuk. Fucking bitch I wish I could jump into this story and fist fight him so bad, like I literally had to stand up bc I got so pissed.







The artist cooked with Ahjussi’s character design, oml
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