
Okay so
First of all, the unofficial translation can ruin it, if you want to read it search for the official.
Secondly, about the story,
I found the first half super cute, fluffy, wholesome, no misunderstandings or unnecessary conflicts just pure love and amazing smut.
In the second half however, when we started to get more details of their past and the action kicked in, I found it to be rushed and inbalanced with smut.
For me, the ending is also a bit abrupt, would love to see some side stories just to enjoy their happyness and to see how things have unfolded.
All in all, I still enjoyed it, loved the visuals and their healthy love. ❀
I get that it's not the best art but I'm just saying that the artist sees these comments :(
Maybe try being a bit less sharp with your words