MY BEBEESSSS ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ THEY ARE ALL MY BEBES!!
I read this in moira rosebud's voice
Disgusting, the Ml behaviour is disgusting to me. He is childish, selfish, entitled and very naive in a way. He decided to trust some baseless rumours instead of actually getting to know the person in direct. Then proceed to make her life miserable because of some childish and stupid reason.
I hope he suffers a lot. The way he treated her made me cry in frustration (as well as how the other treated her as well). I am never coming back but it sure feels good to vent out my frustration in the comment. Otherwise, the art is very good and the plot is sure interesting but not for me. Reminded me why I hate toxic love and dark romance.
Peace out.
Glad I read ur comment before I started reading it! >.<
Started off good for the first few pages, it was intriguing until the FL had a crush on her guardian… Who seemed to have raised her…
Why? He is literally 100 years older and watched her grow. Why must he be the ML? Why can’t he be like an older brother figure that she just look up to.
So yeah I’m disappointed 0_0….
I was hoping he would only be an older brother figure as well... then I come here and find out he is the ML ╥﹏╥ will have to drop this despite the art being nice
giving edward and bella realness
Nope, no, another potential story ruined by fanservice and same generic plot.
Stupid villains who don’t have any IQ and of course they gotta be ugly and always look down on MC. They don’t have any other personality than that. :) what a surprise. Also we get the typical black haired powerful MC who looks ordinary.
When the dude decide to infuse magic and next thing we get is like food war scene like dude ew =_=. The stereotype of the MC saving the “weak” FL from being harassed. I wish for a strong FL with no sexualisation of her please not this bullshit. Of course, she is gonna be interested in him and yay will fall in love with him. That is so freaking cliché.
Then I stopped when there a fan service of panties and butt when a girl went to hug the MC. (╬￣皿￣)凸
I’m sorry for judging it so hard on the first few chapters, but I’m really getting tired of fanservice.
It’s better than I thought! And the art is good! No regrets!
Read the first chapter, One piece development??
Archmage hide some valuable stuff and tells the other to search for it (￣∇￣") it’s totally the moment when Gol D Roger hid his treasure and told the other to search for it if they wanted to become king of pirates.
I am not sure how to feel about it but I will keep on reading it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Lmaooooo bro forgot about him because for him it has been nearly a year but for the
other dude it’s only been a few days.
Okay here are my thoughts, but I guess there is 3 chapters so it’s a bit too early to say it completely sucks. But I got some stuffs to point out to why it’s starting to suck a bit.
So, there is an interesting start ( a bit cliche but still works for me). Dude died due to being tied up and dropped into a cage with zombies. Saw his friend dying because of his ex-girlfriend and the new boyfriend of his ex. Then he woke up and returned to the past, where his ex is yelling at him for not putting her name on the house deed.
First of all, we can notice how shitty she treated him before the apocalypse, and it makes me wonder how the hell did he even like her??? How didn’t he see she was just after his money??? Was he blind or what??? And afterward in the apocalypse, we learn that he took pity on her when he met her again and decided to take her in, only for her to betray him??? How the hell didn’t he notice that she looked way too tidy and well fed to be in distress?? Why the hell didn’t he question about how suspicious it was for her to be alone without weapon with rather revealing clothes and HEELS in the apocalypse. ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ With ZOMBIES outside lurking. BRUH. I don’t know how long he was in the apocalypse but not long enough for him to develop some survival instinct and critical thinking.
So back to where he got reborn, then there’s the appearance of the system. It was like so sudden, and he didn’t seem surprised by the apparition of it. He was like “cool a floating window panel! Nice! Oh I need to eat yay!”. There is not enough suspense nor surprise about it!! And we forget about until it manifest to reveal the missions he got to complete. For now to me it just looks like a practical golden finger/ deus ex machina the protagonist got without explanation (but maybe it will be explained later on, I’m being too hard.)
Also there seems to be a person having beef with him each pages for stupid reasons. They just seem like stereotypical villain side characters with bad personality and zero brain cells. Just trying to pick a fight for no reason with the protagonist to make him look cooler when he has the upper hand or win. For me, it just looks forced and exaggerated. Just like the two women trying to steal his money. Also I feel like everything is happening so quickly but maybe it’s normal because he just came back from the apocalypse and it’s gonna happen in 1 month. 1 month is not a lot too.
Anyway, there are plenty more stuff but then there’s 3 chapters so I told myself to see how it goes, before going to judge it even harder. But for now it’s meh but curious about how it’s going to develop.
Wow those years stuck in a coma aware if his surroundings made him bad shit crazy, like bro even his enemy is stunned by him. I would not want him as my enemy, rip to the antagonist because bitch you are so doomed. Bro has been cutting the ingredients and adding them to the dish meticulously and you are the last part, MC is cooking and you are double cooked.