Read the first four chapters, but there is something that just brush me the wrong way.
So let me get this straight, ML seems to have a negative view on his son even calling him pathetic but dude… you are the one who raised him… you really suck as a father to make your son turn out this way. Sure, there is always outside the home as well, but you also play a big part of it as well.
Girl why would you want to marry a dude who can’t even raise his son right? Like you seen how the son is an asshole to no end, why do you think the father is better? Am I the only one not liking the ML? Sure the son seems not really redeemable, but like he couldn’t have been like that as a child right?
But yeah the art is really good though!
I know right. This story does brush me the wrong way too. It is like son verse father, over the fl, which is weird. Also, when they were talking over the marriage contract, ml said he never have a lover or something, but how was he able to have two son, unless he just want a child. Like where the son mother or what happen to her. The story doesn't even mention that which make me curious. Also, he seem like a bad father to both of his son. The only good thing about the story is that fl is strong, and ml is good looking, and the son is cute. And that it lol
Uh makes sense, but that’s just pitiful to make him a bad person ever since his adoption… if he was an orphan he must have wanted for a family making him evil is just sad.
Yeah the son vs father is weird, and just the fact that ML wanted to have children but not even taking care of them properly, kinda piss me off. Children are not toys, you can’t just wish for a child, adopt one and not even taking proper care of them. For once a FL is strong an independent we have a ML that’s meh. Sad.
My first thoughts. What the actual fuck?
Nothing makes sense, this story is like a mix up of popular Isekai tropes but that makes no sense. So what you tell me is that they kidnap some young women and when they don’t fit the criteria they call them witches and kill them off? And it seems like it’s not the first time?
And the MC calling the prison paradise bc she got food and shelter but girl do you have hot and cold water? Do you have toilets? Can you eat warm food? Can you relax on a soft mattress? No. Prison is not paradise just because you don’t work. It smells, food must be rancid and past out of date, water must not even be filtered, there’s bugs and disease. That’s some BS. And what the heck is the second prince doing in a prison playing the prisoner?
Nothing makes sense.
Donald’s life is too pitiful, I wish he had his happy ending as well! This kind of ending is too much! Him dying, he didn’t deserve it, this is too harsh, I know he died but I still do wish for his happiness. I kind of hoped that we would be able to see more of Stephen an gray moment but I am satisfied with this. Sort of wish to see how shocked he could be if he learned that Gray is white mamba xD.










It’s so good, the concept is interesting and I feel like it’s kind of like fresh air! Sort of! I had nothing to read those last few days so this is so good to read!