WHY DID HE HAVE TO LOSE HIS MACHO MUSCLES AND BECOME A FUCKING TWINK WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS AUTHOR THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY BUT PLEASE GIVE HIM HIS MACHONESS BACK HE LITERALLY HAD IT WHY DOES HE NOT WANT IT BACK WHY ISNT HE WORKING OUT AND GETTING THAT PHYSIQUE BACK DID YOU REALLY PURPOSEFULLY MAKE HIM A TWINK TO FIT HIM WHYYYYYY THE STEREOOOTYPPEE I JUST WANT TO SEE MACHO MEN FUCK GODDAMMIT
OH GOD HE IS SO ADORABLE IM GONNA KILL MYSELF I LOVE HIS CHARACTER HE IS SIMPLY UNINTENTIONALLY FUNNY
SAW TITS AND IMMEDIATELY WANTED MILK
AND THAT ALSO NOT FOR THE TITS HIS BRAIN JUST WENT TO FOOD JUST LIKE THAT NOTHING SEXUAL BUT IT HAD TO BE MILK
AND HE IS SO RANDOM HOW HE TALKS ABOUT FIGHTING SHARKS BEING BAD SO SCHOOL IS BETTER DESPITE IT BEING SO HARD FOR HIM TO COMMUNICATE AND LEARN AND THEN THE NEXT GOOD THING IS THAT HIS GUARDIAN HAS FLUFFY FUCKING HAIR
I want to contact the author and take their money for wasting my time. Sometimes I’m not guilty and grateful that I’m not supporting some artists (these) because I accidentally also do not want to come across shit stories like these and end up PAYING for it.
Ong like wtf is going on in the name of BDSM.
Girl idk how y’all expected mc to call the fucking police because even an adult would be pissing his pants in that scenario
That fucker TELEPORTED
Anyways, speaking of adults WHERE THE FUCK ARE THEY
I’m about to drop this shit bro the initial chapters were pretty interesting but damn what the fuck
Maybe I lack patience but I will give it some time
I feel like I’m reading those toxic bls in third pov
Or rather
One toxic seme two victim uke
Fucking weird
I remember I got a lot of hate for calling mc a bad character, and in the comments I find someone who read the novel say the same thing, that he is “two faced”
They also said it’s a toxic story with toxic characters
See I hope it’s a misunderstanding
But I feel like it’s not
Because I knew right away from the mc’s thought bubbles that he wasn’t a “complex” character but a mean one WHETHER OR NOT HE DID CONTRIBUTE OR DID TAKE ACTIONS
Actions do not ONLY contribute to a character when clearly the character says he doesn’t want to yet he FEELS like to
Weird
But I didn’t mind because this is the first time I’m seeing a mc like this
I saw potential in Yohan but that commenter made me lose hope
I hope this story turns out to be good because it HAS IMMACULATE POTENTIAL
And I hope the characters are portrayed better and hope they aren’t toxic
But what I hope the abuser loses his balls and for the uke’s to to brutually assault him (beat) every fucking day
REVERSE BULLY
FUCKING COOL I LOVE HOW HE IS AS A CHARACTER
CHARMING AND HAS A FUCKING PERSONALITY
It’s evident Yohan has his eyes for the mc (hopefully)
I would’ve loved if this was from yohan’s pov but I feel like it’s even better now that we don’t get his thoughts
I love how he handles the mc, he KNOWS mc has a crush on that asshat. It’s so evident he knows, and he goes out of his way to protect him under certain situations. BUT AT THE SAME TIME he’s not acting all head over heels for him and pulling moves clearly bringing about a boundary between the two. I love how he lets mc unbothered having a crush on that asshat and also lets him slowly come towards him too. He should know that mc is only using Yohan as a replacement but he seems fine w it. Althooo I feel Yohan is NOT also with the best intentions, hopefully he slaps some sense into the mc. But why did he say those last two words, I wonder if it was purposefully with two meanings, maybe he wanted to say that because he wanted mc to know his thought on the abuse is disgusting, or maybe he wanted to clarify something from his reaction to that sentence.
Or worst of all, he’s a straight guy.
The author REALLy tried to make the mc “complex” and tried to add “depths”, but absolutely no, he’s a piece of shit.
First of all, short black haired guy was getting bullied only because of the mc btw, because indirectly it did influence everything. I’m not saying the mc should be absolutely excessively guilty, but he has the RIGHT to stand up or at least ACKNOWLEDGE it was his fault and DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT. Instead he made it ALL ABOUT HIM. I hate these types of people. That guy was vigorously bullied, yet he wants to be your friend. No matter what, he’s doing WORSE THAN YOU CLEARLY!! You don’t need to stand up at least apologise and feel sorry for HIM NOT YOU. We do not care if you actually harbour feelings for that guy, clearly he’s being a great boyfriend! He’s doing the role of an abusive husband perfectly! Logically speaking you shouldn’t even have a crush on a guy like that after what you saw and how he behaves still. Idk man this is not at all complex just messed up. It’s definitely not human, the mc is MADE to be unlikable. If that’s the case I’m reading. I’m reading only for Yohan. If I was Yohan I wouldn’t fuck w this selfish twink. But I understand that he’s made to be unlikable because clearly I will not condone or call this character “good”. I’m not asking him to be a “very good i stand up for every bully justice is served!” type of guy but at least have some sort of kindness?
The moment you said "The author REALLy tried to make the mc “complex” and tried to add “depths”, but absolutely no, he’s a piece of shit." and "Instead he made it ALL ABOUT HIM", I knew you're missing the point already. Like way too far missed the point. Like this statement is pretty dumb and outrageous.
Obviously, it's all about MC since it's his POV. We are seeing their world in his eyes and his thoughts. That's what being a "main character" is, if you haven't realized that. If you're so, ooh, disagree with me, then find me a manhwa or novel that doesn't revolve around the main character.
Secondly, Junwoo is bullying Taesan because he likes him, not because of MC kind of influencing everything (as you said, which kinds of contradictory to your statement btw). If not for MC, the bullying wouldn't even end. So, what do you meant about "he has the RIGHT to stand up or at least ACKNOWLEDGE it was his fault and DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT."? Is it that he approached Taesan that he should be at fault about all this? Come on, seriously. Are you that damn recluse and pathetic to think like that? Even without MC's interference, Junwoo would still bully Taesan because that's the only way for Junwoo to get Taesan's attention. Of course MC would be involved because in Taesan and the whole class' eyes, MC was Taesan's savior. Despite MC's hidden intentions, you should be happy that he was defending someone from a bully at that.
And lastly, you're mid to last sentence reeks of "I'm dry since birth". Seriously, nobody can control human emotions. Logically speaking, you can't control who you will like in the first place. It will only up to time for people to move on from their unrequited love. But sadly, it didn't apply to you since you've never got or have that.
Stay dry, I guess.
Assumptions. You say I have missed the point but you seem to have not even UNDERSTAND my point.
Assumptions again because I’ve most definitely faced an unrequited love, and also everybody has I’m sorry but it’s common sense?
Also doesn’t invalidate my point, that is, both action wise and thought wise mc is not a kind person. That was my point entirely? He did make it all about him??
And about him making it all about himself, do you know how a main character works? No it’s not all about them, not when someone is being severely bullied. “It only happened because the short haired guy wanted attention” well he’s clearly very close to the bully why couldn’t he have taken that drastic step where the bully stops bullying the victim BEFORE? He did after he was consumed by his jealousy, did you notice that? Please
The entire paragraph is assumption what am I going to say against this do y’all actually READ what I say?? Well actually you guys do need comprehension skills too.
We all know and we knew even after that “promise” an abuser will abuse the victim. My point isn’t stopping the abuse, my point is that he did not do much. He didn’t withdraw himself completely but he also didn’t really help the victim all that much. Is that an issue where you will have to reply to me?
I'll be honest this story is just not it for you. You want a good person as the mc but the thing is the mc isn't the best person. He is socially closeted and he is fucking scared. You have no time to be a good person when you don't even feel like a person. That's why I think you're shitty for saying he's not complex and assuming we can't read for shit. A work of literature can be read in many
My god are you retarded
I said I would STILL read this because the mc is simply unlikeable I’m fine w it BUT THE MC IS UNLIKEABLE??
To actually hold this as the same as “literature”
Y’all really think this some kafka shit it’s so sad
I don’t even think y’all are readers if you cannot even comprehend critics
Moreover please do read actual books to understand “complex” characters truly for I am now under the assumption that yaois are the only pieces of novels you read.
I feel like this conversation devolved pretty quickly and I agree with the other person that you don't seem to understand the point of the story? I understand that the MC comes across unlikeable and such but that's the point of the story. The guy is in the midst of highschool as someone closeted and knows that he'll never be able to show his feelings to his crush.
The bully's actions are no way in his control and I get the feeling of wanting him to stop it but the point is that his actions have no value in the situation really. The bully doesn't care about him, the MC is just one of the many friends he can hang out with and that's shown with the lack of regard he shows the MC. The decision to start bullying and continue bullying is all in the hands of the actual bully.
Tbh you can even say that the MC provided more good in the situation, giving Taesan both physical and emotional support. Though that doesn't excuse the MC's thoughts.
I can appreciate the writer not making it a black and white situation, often people end up liking people who aren't the greatest and even when you know that you still crave their attention. This is that situation.
I feel like it'll progress to the MC exploding his thoughts to Taesan when they have a one to one or something. Would be an interesting scene.
I feel like it doesn't need to be said that of course the focus would be on the MC? He is our main character and point of view after all.
Sorry for the tirade you don't need to read if u don't want :). Also please don't put the author and other readers down just because you can't carry on a conversation properly.
Please try to comprehend properly.
If you CAN read you’ll see I’m making only an observation.
Everyone who has replied has seemed to only read the first paragraph.
All of you need to touch grass, understand, comprehend, properly read, analyse then come at me.
Yes please do be sorry because this is extremely tiring. I will read the story for the sole reason of the mc being an asshat.
I cannot actually believe how slow you all can be.
I’m worried for you all. Please read your question papers properly before answering.
1. Clearly I’ve said CLEARLY MY GOD that bully will continue, it was his actions that I expected. I said “I didn’t care whether or not he continued” because I knew he would still.
My point is, he took actions only on compulsion, out of his jealousy, that really doesn’t “elevate the situation” because oh “mc was helping!”
Yeah you’re right he was.
It is extremely clear that both of you don’t seem to actually understand the gravity of the situation at all in the story.
That’s fine, not everyone can handle it. My point is, are you guys twelve years old that you guys cannot take any words of mine? Are you a small child that you do not understand what I’m saying?
Do you guys think you’re reading and cracking jane Austen??? This is a yaoi Manhwa. What the FUCK do you mean “I don’t understand the Manhwa”, we’re on an illegal site reading a story with YAOI in the tags. That is worrying.







Read the entire paragraph before engaging with me or I won’t even bother to reply.
So when I heard that even the ml, (mainly for whom I was going to give this story a try) that is Yohan was going to be an absolute ass, I looked for spoilers. No I didn’t read the novel, but I read certain paragraphs and certain spoilers. Novel way of writing was okay. I had hopes because the writing was alright but
Gosh I already really disliked the mc in terms of a main character. He had ONE ROLE: act like a side character. Goddamn he did NOT do it well. I was looking forward to more of his complex dynamics to being a side character but nor is he complex nor is he well written. A story should have a plethora of emotions if it doesn’t have that and sticks to one certain emotion, sorrow, call it a tragedy. This isn’t a tragedy and a ROMANCE. I could go on about how shitty this took for a turn. I didn’t have any hopes because I did absolutely see this coming. But each to their opinion; I just don’t see how people are hyping this up at all. This is not some literacy genius. My actual concern is; how are you finding the mc “relatable” or “good”. Fine if you like him as a character I WILL not judge; but PLEASE reflect on yourself if you find him “relatable” and understand what the problem is. I’m not going to shove in critical analysis and basic personality inside anyone but no he’s not relatable.
Now comes Yohan. Great character, great complexity, ruined it by making him JUNWOO 2.0 ARE YOU KIDDING ME.
This is a hot take please don’t judge me but I think Yohan is the worst character here, like junwoo is abusive mostly physically but Yohan will be doing it mentally and physically. Gosh, he made me hate him. The thing is, it’s romance. I don’t feel it at all. Is his belief in Christianity a way to divert himself from the fact that he’s a terrible human and he thinks he can find salvation going after god and not working on himself? This is your typical “dark romance”. I’m so tired of this. And then they make him the average “abused ml he’s just traumatised that’s why he’s acting like that waaaa”. Thing is, I did not read the novel, so I will not judge on that particular part, but I heard they pretty much do end up together, like I heard mc takes care of him AFTER ALL THAT HE HAD DONE??? MC NOOOOO GIRL STOP IT I THINK HE IS A MASOCHIST HE HAS TO BE??
I was expecting the main character to act like a side character but with all those “emotions and thoughts” he really is the damn main character of the story. Don’t know I mean it’s not the worst but this is your typical “dark romance bl” and YOU DO YOU but the only thing is no it’s not a great literacy find and PLEASE don’t find mc relatable.I do understand how people would like the novel more, I liked reading the novel but it really doesn’t change my opinions on the characters because well they are actually what they are, it’s just more skilfully shown than what the Manhwa is doing.
Either I’m gonna mute this or shove it up my ass if y’all come at me without anything constructive.
what did yohan doooo can u pls specify?
Apparently they had some sort of argument and Yohan nearly broke his arm and he did exactly what junwoo did, isolate him and made his classmates bully him
The spoilers are below and you can search it up on the web too
They give you the novel’s tits and bits