that shit was so cute it can cure some of the homophobia in ya
also I need more works by this author
this is draaaaagging and I say this as someone who likes slow pacing but they are moving in a circle? the whole thing of him not giving up on his family and it's made worse with how, with time, he only gets dumber and dumber, even the smut is dragging, and you know it's bad when we are reaching the last arc but the problem is still dragging. like I know the ending going to be ass like woosh the problem is solved here both mc happy ever after with not reflection not growth even though the whole work is 100+ chapter (which is LONG by bl standard)
like if I can cut some chapters off throughout the work it will be good, some of the reflection happening in later chapters is good and everything but please why is the uke getting washed down to nothing but his family problem? him losing his smart ass personality after multiple betrayals and disappointments of his family is kinda contradicting? I don't have a problem with him going back to his family multiple time cause sometimes it do be like that but can't you at least not make him an airhead while doing that? give him more? nuance?
rightttt I feel like the author got the order switch up, he was so smart before and so aware but now he kinda downgraded to this. I know smut brings bread to the table but isn't it a bit too much readers would get enough of it too it keep losing momentum, we were at the most interesting part then bam smut!
I gotta say this is the type of manhwa that is really suited for novel formal. Although I haven't finished half the work yet and it's mlt, the writing the pacing is good.
the novel takes its time to paint a whole scene, chapters alternate between past and present, and each chapter gives a glimpse of understanding the character and their demeanor and it helps you understand next/previous chapter better. The whole work is around 10 chapters but each chapter is 50+ pages
I have to say though, mc is a bit wishy washy and I got bad feeling when he moved in with the ml quickly in beginning but what surprised me was this is one of the few bls where no is innocent, everyone knows that they got that immorality in them, and it is pretty interesting how they go about it (their motives, guilt, shame and the breakdown of their internal monologue)
I'm still not sure how fast things going to move seeing how easily the mc agreed to help ml and move in with him, even when all previous present time chapters was about he he needs to bury everything and run away but also it discussed how guilty he felt.
I might come back here once I finish it and if it didn't let me down
can i ask where u read it? so difficult to find korean bl novel tls
someone posted the link recently, it is on t0nk0r books
this is like one of the best abo how come no one recommends it? I don't even see it abo lists
guys where can I read the rest of the first story?
did they change the artist for the side stories? cause that shit was detailed
No, the artist improved their skills
It's the same artist from the beginning yeah
ngl the story is kinda ass. it is rushed, a relationship, a baby and marriage in 50 chapters??? the uke got pregnant and kept the baby when they weren't even in a proper relationship.
this manhwa is still popular with korean readers, getting new chapters and even merchandise...I remember not liking the story, so I reread it thinking I might be incorrect but nah it's still ass. from all other great bl manhwa that deserve this attention, but this one gets it? lol
hey,,! if u dont like it then dont read it.. i personally think it's a great story. Why re-read if you think its ass? and why comment if u think its bad :(( ? just leave the manhwa alone ^^;
cause I can?
god forbid someone has an opinion
no cuz like.. if u think its ASS.. why would u read it again,, its like eating smth u don't like but then eating it again
But maybe you wanna try again to see if your opinion has changed. I used to hate olives and mushrooms and now I love them
yeah!! ^__^ i actually hated strawberries b4 now i love em
At least leave it a spoiler for the people who haven't read it and btw that's how all omegaverse is
cause I CAN? it not hard to give a second chance to such meaningless things and as I said I was surprised that this is currently popular with the koreans, so I thought maybe I mistook it for something else
On another note, your name definitely defines you perfectly.
I mean it’s your opinion but I’m amazed u spend hrs reading something u didn’t like. I usually drop it after few ch.
“the uke got pregnant and kept the baby when they weren't even in a proper relationship” What was he supposed to do with the baby? Its not disposable. Its okay to have a baby when you're not in a relationship, single parents exist.
I can read pretty quickly and I have high tolerance to bs so Im up to reading anything lol
he was an athlete at that. he had no desire to have a child, at least not when he got pregnant , but suddenly threw his life away and hid to keep it?
It's called taking responsibility, I realise this is something unfamiliar to you, I figured I'd help by pointing it out. You're welcome.
not in this storyline. I don't know what got your panties twisted over this, must be a die hard fan of this bs lol.
anyway, seeing a character who had so much love and passion for something, then throw it away because he got pregnant when he had no desire to be, with someone he didn't know at a deeper level, is kinda? rushed? stupid? like scraping everything he was as character just for a baby that he could had got it aborted. this would've been handled better if they at least were in a relationship. and to make it even worse, even after he had the baby, he has no personality and almost reduced down to being a "mom" while the alpha had like 3 personal arcs
I bet if this was hetro the author would've been called a misogynist and bad at writing but I guess bl is no critical thinking zone
If you think this is ass then you're not ready for the deep dark hole of BL stories you'll encounter.
Btw clearly you did not understand the characters personality if you think it was weird the uke took responsibility for the baby. I think you're frustrated because for you he is ruining his life and maybe that's hitting you personally but he grew up in an orphanage he wanted that baby and for him to have a family.
If you want a real fcked up story read Domestic Na Kanajo and you'll be traumatised.
for me, regardless of the content, writing and pacing could make or break a story.
I do understand his desire for a family that he never had, but it isn't executed well, if anything it was somewhat selfish (and stupid), to hide the baby from the father and hide himself in apartment without thinking of the outside world and how to navigate his situation with the baby, especially when he gets born. All this was taken lightly, of course, cause everything will turn "well" in the end
it's almost funny to take such works seriously but oh well I can't turn my brain off like that
It is selfish and stupid but that's the whole point they are trying to navigate something unknown. The top also was having problems with omegas so thats another thing. The uke tried everything as best as he could with his situation. I agree that the author could have showed it better.
You having a problem with how the author showed it is normal that's part of reading, even I felt like it is kinda rushed. It could also because of publishing problem wanting them to wrap it up either way it effected the readers' immersion but all in all it was still a good mahnwa.
And you taking the work seriously and getting invested on the characters, getting angry, sad or happy on their decisions is the fun part no? Thst means you're invested in whatever you read I do that too!
Nah not really one of my personal faves, but I enjoyed it as some light reading.
As to the baby part, which is really the crux of what I take issue with in your take, if someone in a demanding career was in a similar situation and chooses to carry to term and have a baby that's not such an unrealistic thing it happens all the time, it happens now with people choosing to parent as a single parent too. Yi-rim also didn't "throw his passion away" he took a break, that also happens IRL all the time, plenty of pro athletes and celebs take time off to start families or have babies. Why is that a weird notion to you? Further, it appears like the side stories are touching on Yi-rim getting back into figure skating, so it's not like having a baby has ended his career forever.
Personally I enjoy the side stories more than I did the main story, the main story was good but had some irritating factors that left me drained when I'd see an update. The side stories take the cake for me and made me stay, I'm a sucker for good coparenting and a cute baby, and yeah! There's a lot of other great bl out there but for the category of omegaverse, this one has scored higher on my list than...the majority of em.
Also, he takes a break from his career because he's pregnant, it's something that is gonna effect how you skate and since he aimed to keep it, it wouldn't have been safe to continue, especially in a sport that is as dangerous as ice skating can be, falls on the ice, the skates being a major liability and all!
It's okay to have your opinions but there's no need to be nasty abt it :/
also box dye blondi couldn't get laid so he started abuse drugs due to his body dysmorphia from his twink death?? he wanted that omega bussy so bad
LMAOO
Your psychoanalysis of Blondie has me screaming