I’m going to be honest but the plot kinda confused me? I really like the story but I just didn’t really understand the human and his conflict and thought process? He seemed to hate life but then got upset at Demi being a king and then I was confused bc why did Demi send so many demons out and then cheer on Adam for killing them all? What exactly was Adam not able to ever forgive him about? The whole conflict era confused me tbh >.<
It was cute ig? The bottoms trope wasn’t my favorite, he seemed slightly infantile and it pissed me off to read at times tbh and the random SA scene made zero sense? Like it was pretty out of character for the top to me especially with how he treated the bottom before it happened and after it was just weird to me? He’s an understanding and patient guy the whole like time and then a switch just went off and the bottom decided that ig he liked it halfway? The entire scene was random and confusing to me lol
Besides the relationship literally being “yeah so I blackmailed and basically assaulted this guy” and the top being absolutely a shitty ass person the story and other characters are kinda bad too. Like there is literally a moment where one of the girls asks the bottom if he is getting manipulated and abused and instead of him responding he just responds “yes” in his mind? Like what was the point of that scene? we’ve seen it happening for like five chapters now, can the bottom please be able to fucking stand up for himself and instead of everyone playing into the abuse like actually talk to him like it just seems there’s no depth to anything, the romance feels forced and like not there bc the only scenes we get is sex or the top being a shitty person, where are any of the domestic scenes the bottom constantly talks about? The characters have almost zero depth to them it feels and the sex is uncomfortable lowkey bc all the bottom says is “no” or “don’t” or “stop” which doesn’t sound like he’s enjoying it
This was so cute(≧∀≦)
The way the top was such a simp and head over heels and the way he was so talkative during sex, praising him and just like head over heels! Also the way he introduced mako as his “boyfriend?girlfriend?super cute lover” was so adorable,
I was hoping for a side story about the maid and the bartender tho, they were so cute as well (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
I read the comments and I still decided to waste a hour of my life putting myself through that T^T like the story maybe could have been a good one, a absolute abusive and shitty person realizing they are and trying to fix themselves can happen yes! But not with their fucking victim and the fact that the victim was manipulated and victim blamed like the entire time by the pretense that he’s “naive and dumb” which news flash it doesn’t matter how anyone is or what they wear, they don’t deserve to be raped and then forced into porn! This maybe could have been better if the topic of rape and abuse towards the main characters was actually addressed better then yuki being like “sigh so yeah im actually a rapist bc I was raped as a child” and everyone, including the victim, blaming the victim and pitying yuki. becoming a abuser after abuse can be pretty common but to change it needs to be addressed not swept under the ring just bc they were abused
Why tf were they all focusing on that dude drugging him and not him fucking raping him!? “Why did you give him drugs!?” How about we ask why bro raped him!? And then yui just bops him on the head and says they are even!? And then he gets knocked out!? wtf Is even happening anymore T^T this could have been sooo cute with them getting to know each other and him showing the firefighter yoai and them reading it together and talking about it and then fluffy get together but no we got the random third wheel comes in, rapes him, gets forgiven next chapter, and then more drama
I’m like terrified but also ready for it. It’s amazing how this bl talks about being gay and being in a gay relationship and how scary it can be to come out T^T and the misunderstanding makes sense bc bro freaked out, lied about their relationship and then lied about where he was after ghosting my guy for two days! He probably thinks homophobia got to him and would rather be with a woman which like UGH CLEAR IT UP PLSSS ╥﹏╥











The second couple could have been hot if the author didn’t keep changing the size of the top to the point where he some shots just straight up looked like a child bros height was different in almost every scene and it was uncomfortable to read. Size difference can be a pretty hard thing to draw at times especially when it comes to angles so it’s understandable that his size just kept changing but the way he looked like a child was not it, I’ve read some bls with the same height difference and the authors never really had issues with making the shorter person look like a adult but still kept them with that “cute” aesthetic but this one looked too much like a child for me