Eilselie July 11, 2024 7:45 pm

Leaving aside the incest thing it's just horribly written.

Every shot drawn with women in weird positions ends up being more sadly comical than sensual bc the author probably doesn't know shit about building up sexual tension, the sensuality is just not there XD

We're not even going to talk about the interactions between characters because we know it feels fake and it's just bad, the chemistry flew out the window.

Other pathetic part and the thing that ruins the story is how the women's clothes are ridiculously attached to their figures, undressing slowly is part of the "edging" and that ruins the expectation.

An extra thought: it's disappointing is how the feelings of guilt because of the "incest"(? are not even explored, they just go "oh no I know this is wrong but anyways", if the characters are doing something taboo at least make it feel like what they're doing is like grabbing a forbidden fruit, make their interactions outside of intercourse more complicated while they try to disguise their indecent secrets in front of others, like,,, at least make it interesting if you're gonna do weird porn troupes bruh

This became more of a lesson of writing porn for beginners rather than a review lol ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Eheheheh July 14, 2024 2:36 pm

    Right? Also we get teased w the MCs backstory but that doesn't make him sympathetic at all lmao. The characters feel bland as fuck and the mc is not at all likeable. The incest thing is really bland too, honestly it just feels like they are roommates, there is no bonds with siblings and the mom that are familiar.

    Dirty_Cocaine! September 14, 2024 6:07 am
    Right? Also we get teased w the MCs backstory but that doesn't make him sympathetic at all lmao. The characters feel bland as fuck and the mc is not at all likeable. The incest thing is really bland too, honest... Eheheheh

    to me at least, i feel bad for the mc because being raped and manipulated by these women.. because in one of the panels in the beginning, yu can see him being chained up, which even for an abusive family is extra. I get that he shouldn’t have touched his mom like that in the beginning but bsfr, his sister coulda been like “yo, yu can’t be doing that,. we’re family and js cs she’s sleeping doesn’t make it right”, not with the sexual aspect. They’re all js attention seekers tbh.

Eilselie July 4, 2024 8:19 pm

BUT THAT WAS SO GOOD UGHH(/TДT)/

Eilselie June 29, 2024 3:03 am

If you're used to yankee stories you're gonna find this one appealing, it's not that outstanding or interesting like Nakaseteyaruyo Yankee-kun, Abarenbo honey, Megumi and Tsugumi, and others but it has its charm. The story here is simple and there's little exploration of their relationship unlike in the other works I mentioned so use this as a recommendation if you want to find interesting works.

I understand not everyone is strong to digest these stories and maybe that's why there were various comments saying it was bad (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    ccb222 December 10, 2024 2:42 am

    It's not about strength, some people have a preference so they don't enjoy situations that might be viewed as possibly nonconsensual. It's okay if you don't feel that's an issue, but it's not an invalid criticism or a bad reason to dislike this work. (Not judging you, just clarifying)

Eilselie June 27, 2024 8:07 pm

I want to see the triplets and their partners, they inherited his dad's insane looks im here for it ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Also Natsuki damnnn he really likes them older, the talk with his parents is gonna be tough( ̄∇ ̄")

Eilselie June 23, 2024 5:23 am

How did we start at a normal basketball match end ended up in a jail arc??? I thought this was a tame horny story XD

Eilselie June 21, 2024 2:51 am

Why is everyone reading shota so surprised that the shota manga is shota-ing jajjajsbdksksms

    Foofypie June 21, 2024 6:25 am

    Cuz y’all weird and we doing a daily reminder that reading this is weird as hell

    Amies June 21, 2024 8:35 am
    Cuz y’all weird and we doing a daily reminder that reading this is weird as hell Foofypie

    If so, then why you still reading it. And why don't you just mind your own busines

    Foofypie June 21, 2024 8:48 am
    If so, then why you still reading it. And why don't you just mind your own busines Amies

    I’m so sorry ur majesty king of all mighty pedo, I humbly should not make a factual statement that this is pedo content with a little kid doing suggestive things, but I best be on my way as you edge towards this undertone CP content

    Batata June 21, 2024 12:12 pm

    Right!!

    H0rny JellyFiSh June 22, 2024 1:52 am
    Cuz y’all weird and we doing a daily reminder that reading this is weird as hell Foofypie

    Yall need to grow over it you're the actual weirdos

    Eilselie June 22, 2024 11:58 pm
    Cuz y’all weird and we doing a daily reminder that reading this is weird as hell Foofypie

    hmm sounds like you just need an excuse to keep interacting with this shota manga bc you secretly enjoy it, if you were so disgusted by it you wouldn't even look it up

    uma_chan June 23, 2024 4:43 am

    It’s so funny they pretend to sit on some higher moral ground, the title already spells it out what this work is about and they still continue to read it’s giving closeted shota enjoyer LOL

Eilselie June 21, 2024 1:44 am

I need to let this marinate but every time I see a new chapter I have the impulse to click on it AAAAA

Eilselie June 10, 2024 1:08 am

Am I the only one who's having trouble with the order of the pages in multi-page view? I can't make heads or tails of what's going on with the pages all scrambled

    Eilselie June 10, 2024 1:10 am

    NEVERMIND THE CHAPTER 10 WAS FIXED AND UPLOADED, I LOVE YOU SHIKI!! MY LIFE IS YOURS!!!!

Eilselie June 6, 2024 8:40 am

Seems like it's available on this other website
http://hentai2read.com/anal_angel/1/1/

Eilselie May 21, 2024 7:35 am

Did something happen to the author, the art style in recent chapters looks nothing like the author's usual style, all of her works had a consistent style until now ':0

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