
The concept was cute, even tho didn’t like the whole knew each other since mc was a child thing, and then the childhood “friend” was so nonsensical it’s like the author was tryna write a grey character but it’s not grey it’s black and white? IDK HOW ELSE TO DESCRIBE HIM, his actions don’t blend together into a believable human personality, he one moment acts like he was worried about mc in childhood how he had walls but then he locked him in a classroom just cause???, in high school he was in the same circle for a while but then acts like he oh so cared about mc being hit with depression and distancing himself, like ohhh it hurt him to see mc go through that but then he’s punching mc, his actions just don’t blend togetherrrrr, and whys he now once again acting like he has nothing but mc’s best interest at heart, whys he jumping against jini like “do you know what he went through cause of you cause you were gone”? Bitch you don’t get to act like this when you were the one to torment him way before jini showed up…
And then the concept of the story was cute but then ch18 gave whiplash cause how did you suddenly kiss and start dating, jini had all those valid concerns about what if mc only thinks he likes him cause he’s all he has and knows and once he sees the real world he’ll let go of him etc, but then mc says I like you and suddenly the problem is changed as if jini only said no cause he thought mc didn’t like him? I literally thought the beach chapter was a special before I checked it was canon chapter…
then the ending was so entirely unnecessary and toxic, the psycho was unnecessary, the psycho being Jinis ex was unnecessary, the kidnapping and sa and poisoning was unnecessary like what’s all that for if you’re not at least gonna show the villain punished?, and genie was set free but he’s still likely an immortal spirit so the mortal X immortal problem still wasn’t solved… like it focused on all the wrong things ToT the simplified plot is abandonment issues, losing him once and feeling hopeless, losing him again and having hope, that’s it

Bro okay the couple are freaking adorable, the ml is the greenest everrrr, but the bottom made me go insane bro where's your survival instinct and brain, why would you think you can deal with this crap and not ask for help or even inform this multimillionaire guy that definitely has connections, bro he's an actor he knows a thing or two ABOIT stalkers and self protection and bodyguards and shit, why would you think you can do anything on your own
Also I hate cheap plotlines like the psycho and on screen SA, bro their relationship dynamic is adorable as hell, just write some everyday possible normal people conflicts to be the plot, why an obsessed psycho and on screen SA bruh BRUH

Okay I loooove how adorable they are, I’m dying at ml cringing and the prickly shit he said to mc before realizing it him, I love how even tho ml is the one with a years long crush mc is the one having dirty thoughts and going fshhhhhh all the time, I love how their sex scenes didnt jump into penetration but touching each other a bunch of times before that and how bottom was the one touching top first and getting comfy with the dick lol, and my god I’m insane for tops like this, with such dedicated selfless love
And then ok I’m still sad doyoon ye is gone at a;l and probably won’t come back to live better days, I still don’t like how in stories like these the wronged and abused and depressed original body owner is just gone and doesn’t get to live happy days but at least I’m glad the couple are seeking justice for him and not treating it as “he has nothing to do with us so his problems have nothing to do with us”
But also I pull my hair out when in these situations after an argument one leaves the house, like bro just stay in another room till y’all calm down, leaving would only make him worry and panic

I think this is a better ending for ogDoyoon. He suffered so much that I might sound kinda pessimistic but it's better to give him eternal rest instead coz sometimes living isnt all great if you have no love one to stay for. I also think if it weren't for Gyeol mc would have jump first opportunity to go to afterlife since he doesn't have an anchor in the living world.

Ok I wanted it to be more like they’re both on their knees for her but they’re acting more like she’s an object and they’re having a competition over who can have her, the fuck you mean without my permission, why would she need your permission, and then bro tryna force a second dick in and them two bickering while she’s in pain wasn’t it, ew
Okay this is so adorableeee and the story plot is so nicely paced and packed, and I was annoyed at the memory loss plot but honestly Its so it doesn't feel like mc was groomed or smtj, I mean he wasn't cause he was the 21 year old consciousness anyway but even with memoru loss it's so their meeting and his affection for him 10 years later is from a blank slate anyway, not affected by past encounters, and they don't spend 10 years together waiting for mc's body to be adult or smth so I feel like it was handles nicely,
But then bro I can't decide what my feelings are about the brother, on one hand I love redemption arcs and feel good happy endings but on the other hand bro killed or nearly killed them SEVERAL TIMES and pulled psycho shit on mc his entire life, purposely made him isolated and friendless since childhood, manipulated him every way and then as an adult killed his lover like bruh idk I'm having a hard time forgiving him, but his friend is a cutieeeeeeee
But also its weirddd like if he wasn't psycho he was otherwise fully right cause what businesses would sn 11 year old and 28 year old have with each otherrrr, his psycho protective behavior in original timeline was not ok but here from his perspective mc being 11 the protective shit was justified ID HE WASNT A MURDEROUS PSYCHO
but anyway the artists style is so damn recognizable, opened this and I was like hold up I know this style, but was also confused cause do Japanese artists do Korean manhwas ?? Damn, anyway this was delicious