
Bro first story natsuo deserves better and should’ve dumped him, mc is psycho, bro even admits to himself natsuo never bullied him and it was all his insecurity and yet he was going ahead with the revenge plan even tho natsuo didn’t do shit to him to warrant a revenge, he used him for a month, was gonna go ahead and even have sex with him first before brutally breaking up on the anniversary while natsuo’ a been nothing but sweet, broke his heart now anyway with all that cruel shit and nearly raped him too and for WHAT, WHY THE FUCK WOULD HE TAKE HIM BACK LIKE NOTHING’S HAPPENED??? HOW CAN U LIKE SOMEONE CAPABLE OF SUCH CRUELTY BRO NOT EVEN COUNTING THE NEAR RAPE AAAAAAAA
Second story meh but reminded me of some other story I’ve read where a character was abusive to ex basically same mindset and stuff and now he’s with a bigger buffer guy to know he can’t hurt his partner again??/ if y’all know a work like that pls tell me the name I can’t find it lol

Bro did NOT need to be 39 he could’ve been like 25 and it’d still work for the dynamic, also wished the stalking would be addressed for the drama but gonna let it go this once cause lowkey I get it helping him see him as human and not idol or smth also lmao how does he keep getting away with mentioning smth he could only know from that stalking, like ye sure go ahead call him and talk about something you just saw him talk about with someone else but holy shit why do they both, especially mc, exist in their own heads overthinking, LIKE MY SOCIAL ANXIOUS ASS RELATES HARD TO “EATING ALONE AT RESTAURANT”BEING SOME BIG GOAL BUT ALSO OMG THE SELF CONSCIOUSNESS IS EXCESSIIIIIIVE bro the couple were just congratulating a confession, why do you think it had anything to do with “oh look at these minorities good for them”????
ALSO WHYS THE OLDER ONE ALWAYS NAKEDDDDD BRO I DO NOT WANNA TOUCH ANY SURFACE INT HAT HOUSE

For people claiming they’re actually interested in him and not just the sex, they’re awfully selfish during sex and don’t listen to a single thing the omega says

, they didn’t do anything nice for the omega they were just tryna get the most out of him and tryna one up the other alpha, it’d be better if either nurse and teacher ended up together properly or if PE teacher and nurse fell for each other from that tension etc, them fighting for his “heart” is entirely meaningless when omega doesn’t feel shit for either of them, sure they fuck and are friendly but there’s no romantic feelings or relationship potential

It was cuuuuuuteeee but Bro the white hair pissed me oooooooofff, he’s too stupid to realize his own feelings to the point he actually thought he “hated” the guy he actually liked, acted like he had any place to give romantic advice with the “he doesn’t ask you out but still stays with you blah blah” (tho I’m glad mc didn’t fall for it and told him to shut up) and then he knows it’s a serious situation BRO IS TURNING INTO A DOLL HALF OF EVERY DAY and yet it’s not important enough for his conscience not to lie about finding the talisman, not even talking about him KNOWING the two like each other and still tryna butt into it, he’s way too unlikable for me to care about his ship with ML’s friend

Bro I luv the bottom’s character type so muchhhh, the “looking like they’re just going along with the other but actually insanely in love and showing it their own way” typeeeee ESPECIALLY if they’re older and never strongly held onto anyone before and especially if the partner now is puppy type that’s now his weakness,

The masochist detail was entirely meaningless considering he’s basically being sadistic with the pounding in one go and shit, also the bottom overall wants and enjoys it going by the general vibes and it would’ve fixed the dialogue’s vibe if it wasn’t majority “n-no”-s just sprinkle a couple more “so good” and “right there”-s and it’d be great, also if the top listened to redhead’s directions a bit more, also in general they give off the vibes of the couple from the best luck of my life
BUT LIKE it’d be cool if the top was instead masochistic bottom and redhead was the one with big d (same body size tho) and black hair would ask him to pound him hard instead like he does now OR AT LEAST IF HE WANTED GO BE SPANKED EVEN IF HE’S STILL TOP, IDK MAN WASTED POTENTIAL XAUSE I LIKED THE TOP SOBBING AND REDHEAD HAVING SOFT SPOT FOR HIM
It’s a CRIME that this is short, I want a full length storyyyyyy