Since birth She was only ever appreciated by downgrading FL and telling her how she "comparatively" better than FL in every aspect so she developed that superiority complex towards her. Not to mention suddenly coddled child being treated harshly and coldly, they are bound to throw tantrums. She is not villainess don't make her one. Wahhh my shylaaa
I can not understand FL's character. Either be scheming lil spy or just be sly middlemen ( like Edith from "not your typical Isekai story") but she wants to be spy and get fussy over her husband not loving her? Gurl!? Nuh huh. She's so contradictory that my brain hurts. She has this " dense teen personality" who thinks that they are right smart and world revolves around them. Also ML ?? That mofo is dumb af. Bet my dog bruno is smarter than him even tho he can not speak.
I came for some heavy plot driven shit but the author gave me exact the opposite. Disappointing and failed attempt at making a "strong women x cold for everyone but soft for her/ big bear" pair.











I'm not saying it's not good. Like "not bad but not good". Writing is very much childish. Plot itself is not that impressive. Characters are shallow considering vivi has been abused but she doesn't show any sign of it .. like hellow trauma ??? Also I'm not really a fan of that whole academy arc, it was literally there for no reason beside dragging plot. All in all pretty much Wattpad teen author ahhh story
You have to turn your brain off and just enjoy it for what it is and if this type of stuff isn’t for you then let it go
I did actually. Just letting others know , what they are stepping into when picking this up. As i said it's not bad but not good just as u quoted "turn off your brain if u wanna read ts"
It was actually pretty entertaining. Unserious? Yes. Not every fic has to be serious and as much as this one goes? I would say its written better than most. Dumb and corny? Yes but entertaining and cute. You pretty much have to turn off your brain to read most of everything on this site anyways.
you put out an opinion and people attack you for it anyways thx ill go read it
Attack? Oh baby you have never been attacked
Opposing opinions means attack or hate in this kind of day and age lol the replies were even civil
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