i want naru-chan to have someone as well :'))) i tear up a little on the section where the narrator asked her if she's happy, the way she pauses just... IM CLENCHING MY HEART OK :"(((((
thank you so much for picking up this series :"DDDDD im forever grateful :"))))
someone punch me so i can become manly again...
ughh :")))) it's been a while since i wanted to scream out of happiness because of a confession
this is a spoiler for those who didn't read ONE's original webcomic
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if, this version follows the original with the Garou fight, you don't have to worry about Garou. Saitama and him will fight, Garou will become a monster, but Saitama won't kill Garou, and Garou will somehow revert to his human form. let's all just hope Murata follows the original on this one :"))
With Garou being a fan favorite I dont see Saitama killing him.
Even more so since Garou is more human than monster.
Though Im not sure if there were differences between the ONE version and his. At least when it comes to story
thing i gotta say for all of you commenters: honestly, as an art student, an artist, and an illustrator who (currently) have an ongoing comic publishing somewhere in the web, ya'll nasty comments hurts me personally. there's no constructive criticism, no encouragement, just straight insults and/or belittlement (some of you do leave nice comments and it's awesome to see.) throw in a little effort will ya? you demand effort from the creator but you give mindless comments. smh.
for the creator: im gonna just nudge about the art a bit, psychological horror doesn't mean the art has to be dark, you definitely could use blocks to give an eerie atmosphere but in this case, everything became a bit too muddy. you gotta balance the shading from using ink and screen toning, or choose to go with only inking or only screen toning. from what i can see here, you went with 1000% on inking, there's no balance with the use of black and white, a simple shading could work wonders, throw in a bit of screen toning for a bit of depth. i suggest to take your time with anatomy and proportion~ there are a lot of 3d application that helps with this, one i would recommend is Magic Poser it's an app available on ios and android! it's really simple but could really help with getting basic proportion! good luck!
While I technically agree, I think it's wise to know that this website isn't supposed to be for amateur artists to start publishing their work. The comment section doesn't work well for critiques either. I think whoever made this comic might be better off with deviantArt and similar sites - poeple would be much more forthcomming there, for sure.
"i'm not gay" but you both gonna bang either way /shrugs
kwon yuri's face at the last panel just says he's so fucking done with moogyeong hyung lmao
dudeeeee... tthis is the first time a manga made me cry from the bottom of my heart...
yayy! finally the adventure with flashy flash begun! i kinda have been waiting for this from reading the webcomic lmao