
This is the thing that irritates me the most about Korean manhwas they just don’t make any rational sense. You mean to tell me, this guy you’ve been with everyday for years is acting incredibly weird so you follow him to a restaurant where you see him hand over a thick envelope and follow the guy he’s with to the bathroom and your thought is oh I guess they’re dating now I’m heartbroken?? Since when do people pass documents in a stack like that across the freaking table?! This is a joke.

So you’re telling me that all of this hell started because he didn’t want to go out with a girl?!? This is probably the most Korean shit I ever read. I knew it would be a girl, and if I’m remembering correctly it’s the same girl I figured it’d be, but damn that was so anticlimactic. Like get rejected so you decide to have this boy bullied to death?!? In-fucking-sane.

I’m going to give it a try but I just finished reading the 4th chapter and the amount of exposition is making this a difficult read. I understand wanting to give background info but you don’t have to explain every minute detail about everything at the beginning. Explain things as you go. Having a character ask multiple questions back to back just to give background info is such a lazy way of writing. Ex: MC just woke up from not remembering having a one night stand with a guy that’s watching tv on his couch…why is the conversation an in depth explanation about the ML’s preferred romantic partners, past swimming events and pheromone chips(?). Y’all don’t have everything else more pertinent to discuss?

I really like this author and I can tell they have an amazing vision. That being said, idk if it’s the translation of the original work but the way people talk is so stilted. They jump from one thing to the next and honestly I have no idea why the uke even likes him or where the “I love you more than you think” part came from.
Like there’s no way that’s actually possible. You’re telling me that when Hayato was 15-18 Chihuro was 3-6?? Playing baseball with his elementary friends? That’s nonsensical. If you want to do an age gap at least have the characters doing things that they would actually be doing at their respective ages. A first grader playing baseball with their friends, alone, late enough to be seen by high schoolers walking home is just no lol it’s just a no.