That first chapter was supposed to be a chapter 0/prologue (???) that’s the only way this makes any sense lmao
Be toxic af, don’t talk to anyone??? Especially during college when that’s the time to create new connections? Boy bye with your manipulation isolation
The ML already came in her so can’t she just pretend that she went to her husbands place and did it with him but it’s actually the younger brother’s baby or smth?
Someone said smth about a horror tag and yes please we need that on there. I’ve got a pretty strong stomach for stuff but I was NOT expecting an “alien tentacle babies/ male pregnancy” moment so I had a nauseous sec there when I saw the eggs + stomach page
Ngl the art was good. But what the FUCK was all that yappin about the sex scenes would have been better had they not said anything at all. I kept thinking to myself ???????? Every time they said smth new. Idk man, maybe it was just too wattpad-esque for me. Although their other story isn’t exactly “Shakespeare” but at least during their sex scenes it somehow felt more…believable? Less cringey??? Idfk tbh lmao idk anything
The entire world around him was trying to place him into the “trouble maker” title for no reason. Like what the hell is up with the school staff, assholes fr, and also the student who accused him of stealing didn’t even say sorry even tho it was completely her fault
If you pay this debt we’ll definitely remarry??? That’s not reassuring asshole, that’s a threat
She wasn’t joking when she said he was shit at sex lmaooo no foreplay, no making sure she’s wet enough, no lube, just “stick it in boys!!” I mean not knowing where the cl*t is is pretty common in media for whatever stupid reason even tho it’s literally RIGHT THERE lol, but no breast touching, or even any sensual touching in general???
THE WAY I LITERALLY SAID “DONT GO” AND THEN HE SAID DONT GO IM AKSHSJJS THEN THE FINGERS BEING INTERLINKED HELP HOW DID SHE NOT FOLD IMMEDIATELY
That his squad is all a little in love with him somehow (both me being hella delusional but also??? Why the hell would they listen to him, a skill-less person in comparison? They don’t seem to have that much respect for rules/authority in a general sense)
YOU DON’T KNOW HOW MUCH I WAS RAGGING DURING THE CHAPTERS THINKING PRINCE WOULD BE THE END (I’ve fallen into the trap too many times of first dude that shows up is the end goal I thought it was playing into that same cliche) BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BE MAGE FOR THE WIN LETSSS GOOOO