Let me be frank. Overall, the story is not bad, just a little... (I stopped reading a few times lol). The plot has no clear theme and sometimes it's too focused on minor conflicts. It's overwhelming. I got confused. Although some major events happen, it's not too engaging... Not hate tho~
I think the main issue is that it spends too much time in some places and too little time in others. The pacing is a lot slower in the beginning, giving more room for MC's characterization and some sweet stuff. After the kidnapping/auction bit, the story goes a lot faster with dreams and new powers and gates and all. You could cut down a lot of the first couple of chapters and just read from the auction arc onward and not lose a whole lot of the story. ML's connection with the main villain, villain's doppelganger, dream foreshadowing, world mechanics exposition, all of it happens after that for the most part.
That MC... he really got too much on his plate, huh. Honestly, too much is as bad as too little. Lots of stuffs happened at the same time made the story a bit... I dunno. Sometimes, I got annoyed just reading it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
That's why u can't draw uncle and aunt soo hot. They'll become ahjuicy and hot mama ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Btw, ML ISS..!! DEMN IT SOO HOT!! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THAT EXPRESSIONLESS FACE!!!
I love cold top
I also love crybaby top
Poor top is also cute
Anything is fine as long as he is not a mental physical abuser fxxxxr ╮(￣▽￣)╭
After thousand of years waiting... (Lmao)
Here comes the CONFESSION!!!
Tho it's still uncertain (－.－) so what
Arghhhh!! I read 5 years worth of chapters in one night!! So how many years I need to marinate it !!??? Should I wait for 5 years??!! I can't stand the cliffhanger (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Uncle is soo pitiful. But, he looks cute too. Errrgh my conscience. Mybe I should smash his bastad son and that debtor guy (but this guy is fxxkin hot argh!! My conscience).