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This story is the epitome of “you’ve got a little plot stuck in your smut”. This story wouldn’t have been this long if they didn’t have sex every other chapter. S1 was intolerable. Just when they got some plot in, these horny mfs had to have sex. S2 cooled off a bit cuz they had that huge conflict that separated them, so it was unavoidable that they couldn’t have sex, but the moment they got back together, it was sex all over again. This story isn’t even that long to begin with, just 40 chapters total with some side stories in between. Could’ve easily halved it if they weren’t fcking all day every day.

I was actually interested in the plot and its progression. The whole misunderstanding and hurt, I was digging it, but it kept getting interrupted by sex. They’d get a little plot dialogue in then immediately these guys will have sex.. This story has more smut than romance, they should’ve added the smut tag and removed the romance tag.

When they actually focused on the plot I quite enjoyed it. The top was a douche and I enjoyed his begging. I wish he suffered longer. The bottom is a die hard fan through and through, no surprise he forgave so easily. He’s just another blind fan after all. Their relationship developed nicely imo. Bottom was into top but at the same time, still had his doubts, as both a fan and just a ordinary lover. Top wasn’t into bottom and kept pretending, but along the way he grew affection. There’s layers to it, I can see the effort in building the characters. But after the conflict, I feel like it just got solved too easily. From what felt like a multi layer effort just turned into basic characters.

I would have liked to read more about the cousin idol and the former idol member. Their relationship seemed to have had a hiccup and even seemingly broke up. But they got it resolved along the way in the background of this story. Im especially interested cuz they’re so polar opposites. Cousin idol is so expressionless and deadpan while former idol is all sparkles and smiles. Such a odd but good combo so what’s their story, ya know? Got me nosy.

Overall, it’s a decent read.

After all this teasing theres gotta be a least one scene of them doing it in dragon form, right? Right?!?!?!
（/TДT)/

Oh my fcking god I love a smart ass motherfucking couple One is smart enough to escape and one is smart enough to figure out about the escape. Done and dusted, they're ready to get married.

Nearly clicked off many times cuz bottom is so cringe you’re embarrassing af ong. Forgetting the rings, then accidentally wearing the bunny suit. I’m embarrassed for you!

The whole misunderstanding is typical. They played each other so I’m not even mad they caused their own problems. Y’all deserved the crap y’all put on yourselves lol

Sigh~ aside from the plot looking like its gonna be cute funny and good, I also just love the art. The crisp line art and panel structure, the "coloring" of the gray scale. It's so nice to look at (♡˘◡˘♡)

Threw him like a bag of trash

it's not a coinkidink that the guy dressed as a frog has a lily pad birth mark?

can someone summarize what themes/components they liked/disliked about this, without major spoilers? (some is fine). im tryna see if i wanna read this or not.

You don’t need a dad, you need Jesus. You both need Jesus. Seek help

I love the art. The plot? Meh. I mean geez, yall ran a marathon around each other. I'm surprised they're childhood friends because you would think having lived your whole life together it'd be easier to just blurt out "I love you!" And laugh it off, but then be like, "you fr?" And then like, "yeah actually" and then boom dating. The most awkward childhood friends ever. I would have believed them if they said they only knew each other that last year of high school.

The top is pushy and selfish, the bottom is too lenient. The amount of times the bottom was slowly coerced into agreeing to do things is eye rolling. A combo for disaster when no actual verbal communication is established. I dont care if yall both want this in your inner dialogue, say that shit out loud or all this shit is just bullshit.