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The author almost made Touya become one of those psycho obsessed characters but ditched the idea? His character was so inconsistent. One moment he had this dark aura around him, I thought he was going to do serious damage, but the next he's this innocent puppy for his big bro. I wish his character would have just been one or the other. The author attempting to have both just makes Touya look half-assed.
Naoto's feelings for their dad was also forced. I don't understand pushing that narrative when just the bro-cest stuff is already barely developed. You don't need all that other complicated stuff in the mix as well. Or if that other stuff is necessary, then at least execute/pace the story well to expand on every detail. Overall this story was rushed and shallow.
For the side story, meh as well.

So MD was not angry about the rejection nor did he care for Chanwoo using the safe word? Tf boy? Lol. All these past arguments and for what people. Y'all done wrote essays for nothing lol. The author done whooshed all y'all essays on her desk be like, "nah we ain't about that serious stuff, this not that deep" and ended this side story with MD only doing it cuz he wanted to see Chanwoo's reaction while he smile like a sweet boy. I'm officially dead.

Should've kept with the rape and have him be used by multiple guys over multiple occasions. Turning this into a sappy love story, what a waste.

Okay now you're full on telling jokes. You don't see the irony in accusing me of being the reason yaoi will cease to exist because I'm "ungrateful", while you have read 1k+ yaoi stories on a pirated website? How many of those have you bought, exactly, sir "grateful" fan? This is the funniest thing I've read all day. Thank you jungkook. I hope you realize being grateful does not pay people's rent.

Because I can be on this website. What's the problem? As far as I can see, I see none. Only people trying to call me a "bitch" because I said something that they disliked. How about you focus on writing your own comments and reviews. I don't get why people wanna get so worked up over someone else's comments and opinions, acting like the author's pets or something, policing comments so diligently. I hope the author recognizes your hardwork and give you a reward or something.

And? You've made your point. So what? Did you want me to apologize and say I'm so sorry I thought it was a waste? I'm confused why you and the other guy are so angry. Is this your first time witnessing a negative comment or what? I don't feel bad about what I said, I didn't even insult the author's work and effort, saying they did an awful job or whatever you assumed I said, I just thought it was a waste they didn't continue with the rape part and instead chose to change the story into a sappy romance, that's literally a VALID OPINION, so the only one's who seem to be offended and can't sit still are you and the other guy. Don't push your principles on me. I don't care for what you think about the story, don't need to bother with what I think about the story.

Given Chanwoo's stubbornness and MD's frustration with how Chanwoo treats himself, even though I don't agree with how things were handled, I think there was a cause and effect and things had to turn out one way or another. This was the way it turned out, unfortunately. Chanwoo needed to be cornered to face the truth and MD needed to become a jerk, imo. It didn't have to be that way. But with the situation, Chanwoo's and MD's personality, things had to escalate. Like, in what ways do you get a stubborn person to admit to themselves? One is by using their stubbornness against them. That's exactly what MD did. He manipulated the situation around Chanwoo's stubbornness and made him submit. Not the best or healthy way, but it worked.

Spoiler
Based on the raws......it could go 2 ways imo. I feel like Suha is trying his very best to avoid conflicts with redhead at all cost so imma base my theories off of that.
1. Suha somehow covers his bruised cheek effectlively or maybe it magically doesnt bruise as visibly. And Cuz they promised to do with each other only, this pic of Suha sucking D is gonna cause the director to get angry. suha doesn't try to explain either since he doesn't wanna worsen the problem. Director becomes disappointed in suha and either have a ton of baseless rough angry sex or he completely avoids suha altogether cuz he is hurt real bad. Misunderstandings ensues. He doesnt know suha was forced.
2. Suha's bruise couldn't be hidden and it shows. But Suha tries to lie about it cuz he dont wanna worsen problems between redhead and him, and perhaps even start conflict between redhead and director, but director is smart enough. He's mad but hes not buying suha's story and understands the circumstances that suha was forced.
Either outcome, only ONE result is satisfying for both, that is redhead gets knifed in the balls. And the grandma get slapped some sense into her. I havent forgotten her, how she keeps bitching about director but praises this sick person left and right. Grow some new eyeballs lady
Since the official translations is out on Tappytoon, I'm gonna reread this again there. Might as well lol. If anyone can, y'all should too. If people can't, they try next time around or whenever you can. We all struggling one way or another, no shame if you genuinely can't support.