started strong but the ending was… hmm…. not sure how i feel about it. it’s was a little too happy/wholesome for my taste. i would’ve liked it more if the mangaka drove home the point until the very ending scene that ryo’s actually fucking sick in the head but yeah, well. i guess. like i said before, i do appreciate that despite how messed up all of this was, it still managed to be mostly consensual in regard to the sex scenes. also i gotta say, this mangaka draws hands and hands interacting with body parts so well. when ryo was gripping/touching/brushing kaede with his hands, it always looked so... right. like, the understanding and visualization of shapes, how hands and fingers curved around them… idk how to say it. i just fucking enjoyed looking at the hands in this manga lmfao
every time i saw the word brother i wished i was jared who never fucking leaned how to read
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wasn’t a fan of their other bl, this one didn’t hit either. i can’t quite grasp what’s turning me off so much with their works or why i can’t get past a feeling of indifference when seeing these characters
it kind of lacks substance and it offers more of just escapism rather than being able to connect with something raw and real, while also having no lasting impact
like it just focuses more on creating a compelling, impactful narrative with a shock-factor, nonetheless its quite good but it just lacks in some factors
i get what you mean. their other bl felt very shallow to me and im kinda getting the same feeling with this one as well :/
The reason why you feel that way is how you can't probably comprehend the words used by the author. The author did not have to write his story openly for you to guess his intentions rather you have to put more efforts to understand them.
says the random internet user who evidently isn't able to make correct use of english syntax and grammar. out of the two of us, i'd wager on you being the one who has more trouble with proper comprehension lmao
How laughable. If you're referring to my lack of proper punctuation or incorrect grammar usage, I'd admit I made some mistakes, probably due to oversight since I didn't review my post thoroughly. However, your assertion that literary comprehension is linked to syntax and grammar as a random internet user is blatant ignorance and sheer stupidity, since language and literature are entirely different fields of study. (I suspect you're one of those who uses linguistic competence to mask poor cognitive comprehension abilities.) The topic of our debate is on literary comprehension not Language comprehension.
plot was okay, handled okay, nothing outstanding though and the ending after all the yearning and the angst felt rushed. but i really gotta hand it to the top for actively using his brain and not his dick for the thinking
ohh nagi-chan, you really are cute. this is the perfect mix of slice of life and intimacy with consent and communication (though personally i’m not the biggest fan of slice of life and what happens after the relationship gets established, so it felt a little long-winded to me). this artist is very good at drawing kisses in their style btw
it’s officially tagged younger top so yeah, it’s snow white. too bad
thought this was okay for what it’s worth but nevermind, he sexually assaults him as soon as he moves in
when did that happen? In raws???
yes. ch 3
oh no! And I was looking forward to this aww shucks
sigh we can never have good things
cause the latest comments are just people eating this shit up for whatever reason and calling it wholesome, here’s your reminder that this relationship is built on sexual assault and rape. you’re welcome
BROOO WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON THIS IS ACTUALLY NOT BAD
but first of all! finally some fucking competition for “hot fat cock top who is decent” of the year! held himself back from jerking off on the sleeping bottom, got called out, apologized!! didn’t push for penetration!! blushes a lot!! the only deduction he gets is for not eating that perfect hole when it was right in front of his face??? wtf
so what’s going on with all of that. maybe i’m reading too much into it but the emphasis on the scent? the emphasis on the neck biting? this isn’t some surprise omegaverse, is it? lmao. i’m a little on the fence about the bottom cause he’s so hard to read and i’m getting whiplash from him acting smug and then goofy but it’s also exciting cause i really wanna know what’s his deal