and when the world needed them the most, yellowbishop appeared
love me an enthusiastic bottom but the art is sooo messy. it’s like they were about to cook so hard but took the pot off the stove too soon
Nooo, that’s what makes it stand out. Clean line art is already been done all over. Love it when artists actually have the sketch artstyle
i definitely like sketchy art styles too but this one is - at some points - on a whole other level imo. like, there’s messy sketchy and aesthetic sketchy, iykwim? and to me this is very much messy sketchy. there even was a very distinctly unsightly panel in one of the earlier chapters (where they were fucking) where it looked like the artist had 1 minute to finish the scene before sending the chapter in lol
i read this up until the point where kain cheated the first time, then stopped and went to the posted photos to see what i was getting myself into. saw that kain cheats AGAIN. i was left flabbergasted. speechless. cause the way i understood this, this was somehow shaping up to be a one-of-a-kind love story with bumps along the way but then the cheating happens so casually both times and both times kain's just... forgiven. i've really been trying to wrap my head around why this happened but the only conclusion i could come to is that kain was so used to sleeping with any man he could get because it was a form of empowerment and liberation in a society that hates gay people yada yada so that now this is supposed to be his struggle? to find his place in an actual, monogamous relationship? you're telling me he didn't think once about the kind of consequences it could have to sleep with the ex of his current partner before or while he was doing it? idk dude. make this insufferable man have SOME awareness please, my god...
this is garbage, actually. the contrast between them (size difference, personalities) is chefs kiss, the art is chefs kiss, but it was made wholly unenjoyable by the assault and rape
the rape scene was so fucking unnecessary, it ruined any potential this ever had. like.. he was enough of an asshole without the rape so he could’ve redeemed himself with that memory loss starting over business
Meant to upvote my bad. Totally agree with you I don’t know why authors constantly feel the need to add SA when it’s not crucial for the plot point.
i’ll keep my bookmark on the other version but thanks i guess lmaooo
the random german speech bubble in ch 3 jumpscared me
art was great but story and characters turned out to be mid. the smut was… ugh. hate to say it, but it was kinda cringe. like okay i get it, you need to be in his ass so badly and whatever. moving on