
..... I'm genuinely shocked people liked this lmao the idea was interesting but I think everything came across as cringey.
Also, this might be because im Australian and my dads side is aboriginal, but that whole flash back didnt really sit right with me. 10,000s years ago aboriginals be looking that light huh? My thought process is if you don't plan to be accurate about people's culture maybe its best to not write about it? Other Australians and aboriginals might think different than me though, this is just one way to view it,

Am I the only one that feels like these feeling came from no where? Lmao they could've added a part where he saw the delivery dude shirtless which caused him to have dreams and this is where his tension came from. But instead is was just straight up hate, to having a random ass dream. Idk the correlation isn't here for me,
I love this is muchhhh