not him mogging why do i have to wear a flower grandma t shirt but you look bad as hell in that fuck ass vest LMAO life is unfair fr
i cringe everytime at her pick me flirting but iām letting it slide because i love a freaky mc but girl please this seducing is making me pause from second hand embarrassment
i understand how drug addicts feel like. that wasnāt enough for me iām very grateful to the artist for working hard for weekly updates but im so damn greedy
call me a party pooper but i fucking hate the āiām giving you a hickey so you canāt enjoy swimmingā they pulled this shit in maid sama and it made my eyes rolls. if a man did that to me iād sock his shit. youāre not leaving hickeys on me cus you want to control who gets to see my body
kinda sucks they shoved the proposal and marriage into one chapter, this chapter felt very rushed. also, donāt care what anyone says that magic mine proposal was NOT romantic at all. i donāt care that she was talking about mines before homie wtf do you mean youāre making me hike in my heels just to shove me in a cave with mud crystals like itās suppose to be pretty??? like there are way to make magic mines look beautiful and this was not one of them. itās literally just dirt with like clusters of three crystals shoved every five inches. story was mid, ending was midder (if thatās even a word) i still finished it but i wouldnāt reread jt
dropped. this shit is so corny.
the feminism in here feels so superficial and out of place. itās like the fairy tale version of feminism. āgirls donāt want to be married off!ā āgirls have it badā we get it, can you be original for once? instead of it actually having any depth, it just feels so insincere.
the conflicts arenāt actual conflicts and are solved within the next chapter. theyāre trying to give the mc this girlhood feminist queen story but itās giving 2015 buzzfeed feminism. not a single character is likable. i tried giving it a chance but couldnāt.
i hate when authors drag in unnecessary love interests when itās clear the mc only likes one person. idek how dion even became interested in the mc
yeah i really donāt gaf about this extra and the fact her friend died
why is no one talking about how horrifying the zombies are??? what the FUCK kinda zombies are these ???? we got giants ?? slime??? little gremlins??? huge ass snakes??? a bitch that looks like a fucking DRAGON HELLO ?????
the art is pretty but the aegyosal takes me out. it looks like eye wrinkles
despite the shitty rape, the rendering and coloring is so holy
in a perfect world, this would have been a werewolf, elf, saintess poly. i couldnāt gaf about the other three hoes
i love the crown princeās design, we need more mls with brown hair! unfortunately, heās a fucking weirdo. i genuinely donāt wish for her to get with anyone. either she escapes or she kills her herself, my poor girl has suffered so much :(
honestly, i donāt even care that her boobs are humongous because boobs like that exist in real life, what irks me is her chest to waist ratio. her waist is like ten inches and she looks like sheās gonna twist and snap in every panel. iām totally fine with her having huge boobs as long as the waist matchesāwhich it DOESNT. and it irks me even more seeing other women with regular chest to waist ratios no you cannot have like I-cup boobs and have a waist circumference of like ten inches. also, idk if anyone else has a problem but she kinda acts like a child and i donāt like it. thereās a difference between being innocent and naive and acting like a child. is she fucking stupid? who changes and bends down in front of two men? god even for a pornhwa, itās ridiculous.
i loved seeing her switch and be strong when she was killing that monster. i wish we could see more of that instead of this lustful-virgin fantasy. sheās pretty and has a unique character design but sheās being nerfed by the pornhwa genre, what a shame
the author tries to frame the mc as a clever, seductive villainess, but the writing leans on exaggerated dialogue and constant ālook how smart i amā moments. instead of feeling genuinely cunning, it comes off as forced and a little corny. the mc is written like sheās always one step ahead. oh someone is picking on her? that womanās husband is cheating. oh jediah is flustered by her? she wants the merchant guild, not his actual attention. oh her husband is complaining? she talks back to him like sheās got the upper hand. it feels like a gimmick. the author keeps trying to push this narrative that the mc is enticing. the countess likes her suddenly because she wore a dress from the past. the prince disguised as a duke likes her because sheās so different. her husband is starting to like her because sheās so different and alluring. that one guy is liking her too. even her knight blushes. and itās like ? how did you all start to like her? thereās no real groundwork for why sheās so alluring. it just feels thrown together. i wish we couldāve gotten more development.
for example: the countess begins to like her after five chapters. letās say, the countess was interested at first because she wore a similar dress from her debutant days. but then the mc shows how smart she is! they portrayed the countess to be this girl character but she folded within two panels? i mean, i like the story but with the recent chapters, it feels so corny. sheās not a villainess, sheās just playing a very bad role. also, maybe itās because i havenāt reread the chapters, but how does she even know the baron seamus wants influence and is talking to the merchants?? like girl, youāre powerless, how tf do you know that?
I DONT EVEN LIKE THAT FUCK ASS REDHEAD GIVE ME SIR MIOOOOO MY HEART IS SHATTEREDDDD
i love the āstuck on an island tropeā just not when it resorts to cannibalism (ā§āā¦)
this is the shit that needs to be dragged on for 100 chapters !!! i love wholesome yaoi


















