wait the lust cookies actually looked really good. now i’m hungry
sera looks extra bad this episode like bro she’s so bad i fucking love a hot bitch who will stand her ground
i will absolutely be the person who takes everything seriously. the one thing i hate the most about childcaring manhwas (this one included) is the fact that the “dad” is NEVER the biological father. now i’m not talking about the daddy-daughter manhwas where the mother has died. i’m talking about the very specific niche where the female lead is taking care of the child of the male lead. i’ve noticed that 9 times out of 10, the ml is never the real dad. it’s either a distant relative, a niece or nephew, or even a fucking orphan.
and i hate this narrative that a lot of authors love to paint and overuse—a virgin male lead. the deliberate distancing of any romantic or sexual experience feels a lot like purity culture. and i understand the appeal: “he’s never loved anyone BUT the fl.” but this is a childcaring manhwa? so why is he not a biological dad? like you want the hot dad baggage but not the actual dad part?
he’s a virgin. he’s never loved another woman. he hates other women oh but HER. the female lead is the ONLY one who can change him. yikes. this narrative flattens the character of the male lead SO much. like dude, he’s a fucking adult. YES he should have an ex. YES he should have been in love before. YES he should have had sex. especially if he’s like in his 20-30s. like what do you mean this grown ass man has NEVER touched a woman or even talked to another woman?
it makes me sick. it cheapens the romance and it doesn’t even feel like a true “he’s a dad” story. obviously, i’m not discrediting that adoptive dads aren’t real dads but if it’s EVERY manhwa? like single dads exist!!
it also feels a little misogynistic like oh no woman was important enough or special enough to ever wow him. i believe that authors and readers tend to insert themselves into the fl’s perspective and feel like they’re special because a man so successful has never looked at another woman but HER. and honestly, this is a very shitty take at romance. love is not always gonna be “he never loved anyone but her” it’s so boring like i LOVE a story where there’s an ex, it shows that the ml HAS some complexity to his character besides being the virgin ml.
honestly i could go on and on about this. the manhwa is cute ofc but i rolled my eyes after realizing he’s not the actual dad.
if priest noel wasn’t already religious, i would’ve shown him heaven really does exist
not to be the bitch who’s always taking things serious and ruining the fun, but i saw this one story of this girl giving her bf head while he was driving, they got hit and her jaw locked in place because she died on impact. because she was dead and her jaw was locked, she bit his dick and he started bleeding and when the paramedics arrived, he was losing blood from his crotch. and ever since i saw that story, everytime i read a scene about giving head while driving, i cant even enjoy it cus this is in the back of my mind
i shouldn’t have expected much from a smut anyways but the ending was still disappointing. story is 4/10. get ready for a yap session, otherwise scroll.
first off, the smut wasn’t even that good. it was mediocre at best. i do like the dynamic and that’s the only reason i look at it in a positive light. otherwise the explicit scenes were absolute shit.
charlotte is a little deranged and she’s ugly. hated those fuck ass bangs but when it comes to femdom stories, i’d eat dog shit if it was served to me. i’m so desperate for a good femdom story and this one unfortunately disappointed me as well.
obviously this story was never meant to be taken seriously but as a reader, i’ll still critique it. i still don’t understand how tf dale fell in love. i guess homie is just a master masochist. he’d fall in love with a dildo if it fucked his ass hard enough. i don’t know how charlotte fell in love either. i guess if her dog turned into a human, she would’ve fucked it too.
i can’t help but mourn what could’ve been a good femdom like if they wanted to go the romance route, it would’ve been so nice to see the development from dale fulfilling his duty to his conflict with falling in love with charlotte. it kinda just felt like someone turned off the lights and when they turned back on, suddenly both dale and charlotte were in love. also not to mention the shit ass ending with the marriage done in like two panels and then the random time skip such a waste
i wouldn’t even recommend this to someone who wants to read it for the smut. skip
adrian mogs them both. the mc and the ml are ugly and basic as fuck
straight omegaverse? both the mls in a originally bl novel are obsessed with her? double homicide
i will say i was confused and did not realize that larriette and liliette were different ppl LMAO even the names are similar
i mourn the father-son relationship they had in the other timeline
i support the princess getting her villain origin story from chris. she’s so sweet and innocent, she doesn’t deserve to be played by a fucker who can’t even admit his own feelings and instead obsesses and mentally torments the girl he likes.
the rotting, wrinkly, decaying fucker better die soon
i wish i could kill that little evil demon with the dewdew hair
why did they label it “the end” and label the next two chapters as side stories when really it’s just a continuation and the story is no where over. maybe i’m just the weird one but side stories usually don’t follow the main plot anyways ilay is the blackest rotting flag ever but im loving the yearner arc and i need more of it
eeron is so fine y’all, especially when he’s crying
hey guys…remember when this was a zombie manhwa…and all we had to worry about were the zombies