
That black patch in the middle of her hair is annoying.. just change her hair color completely ugh. Or at least I wish they started as individual strands instead of going middle roots to end.

Personally i like how realistic change of hair color was, outgrown roots are not pretty, but individual strands would be way too unnatural. The only issue for me is it has taken long enough to notice them and do something about them...The ML is intrigued by observing the changing and MC is kinda giddy?

A man smoking indoors on a meal, using the food as ashtray… yep no I don’t like this and the fl is even as frustrating

This.. honestly! People are different from each other and there are many types of personalities out there. This is why I cannot fight the author for her/his choice, but I def can criticize it and stop reading lol. This story is just not for everyone as this is a fl that’s either written by a man or by (not a girl’s girl) author.

I feel like the author is taking the easiest way to move the story along. If the FL was more clever and truly avoiding the ML and truly keeping her pregnancy secret, then this story would take a lot more time and mental effort for the author to come up with realistic reasons the ML would know and find her. So her character's intelligence is thrown under the bus. :/

Why are you all hating on the girls lmao. I like them they have personalities and are strong.

Is not bad... just... over focused on. To the point I'm kinda forgetting what his objective is and where is the story going...
Yes, they have personality and are strong... but they are also kinda annoying... and just... imagine if they focused on og mc and white haired dude and their background and feelings about mc as they do for these girls... my point it... this is not a fricking romance... so why focus on it? It's normal to have it as subplot... but the key is sub... but it's been focused on too much...
Yalll their anniversary is coming soon :’) March 21 mark your calendars!!