When i look at this story as a whole i have some mixed feelings about it. At the start it rubbed me the wrong way, it was also i think my first omegaverse, and i didnt like the whole degrading omega and almost gang rape, ans the only option to not be rape is mating and hoping you fall on a good alpha. But than the second part actually takes this problems more seriously and even offers solutions and not just well thats the world we live in, it sucks. The characters are also more likeable now. So i didnt like the start but i like the end.
In what way is it cliché? It's unlike anything I've ever read before. The plot isn't particularly messy either. I can agree on the characters making dumb decisions though. They do, all the time.
When i look at this story as a whole i have some mixed feelings about it. At the start it rubbed me the wrong way, it was also i think my first omegaverse, and i didnt like the whole degrading omega and almost gang rape, ans the only option to not be rape is mating and hoping you fall on a good alpha. But than the second part actually takes this problems more seriously and even offers solutions and not just well thats the world we live in, it sucks. The characters are also more likeable now. So i didnt like the start but i like the end.