Loopholes, loopholes... But anyway, the FL isn't dumb, I'm definitely not allergic to smart FLs. This is salvageable. Camping here for more chapters
You know that feeling when a full-fledged shoujo author tried out yaoi for the first time but wanted it to be manly and unique... Yeah, its that. The pacing, the atmosphere, the character build up, its all over the place.
Its not bad. Its wholesome somewhat but it wasn't that good either.
Lucas is like a sun, brimming with confidence, he would be perfect... If this was a sunny optimistic story! Sadly, we're taking depression route here from misery street.
A person too secure could actually make his/her partner feeling insecure. Not that its bad but people with too low self-esteem would probably destroy themselves.
Maybe thats why I don't like the 2nd ml at the beginning for the fl. Dude be professing his affection and love but girl was too depress. AT THAT TIME THE 2ND MLs BUTTING IN JUST MAKES ME FRUSTRATED!!!
But seeing how he is finally enlightened to play fair--GODDAMN CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! He's not perfect, he's a saint!
Im 99% sure Aiden is definitely the ML and will get together with the MC but that 1% of wanting Lucas to be the ML but we all know he wont BUR DAMN IT. then again they wouldnt be thay compatible
Its good? Its wholesome? No rape? Its not exactly a gem but is there more?
The stork will deliver it to us. The innocence. lol
Psychologically speaking, he needs a therapist. lol
Can we all just raise our hands and admit, we love their friendship? lol
Its been a long time since we have such engaging characters with real personalities and can think on their own with real plot